This was a bit of a shock, the tense was totally different than the rest of the Marjoram series. The sudden past-tense to present-tense kinda drew me out of the story. Other than that it was interesting, I'm curious to see where this goes in future oneshots/the series proper.
This was a bit of a shock, the tense was totally different than the rest of the Marjoram series. The sudden past-tense to present-tense kinda drew me out of the story. Other than that it was interesting, I'm curious to see where this goes in future oneshots/the series proper.