Sweetie Belle after a accident involving some explosives discovers she is not real. Fortunately she is not alone and has many friends to support her. Also contains Applejack x Rainbow and Discord X Pinkie. Please tell me what you think in the comments. This story is going to rewritten in the future under a diffferent name.
Great first part bro
8132123 Thanks it really makes me happy to hear that.
I feel like I'm reading something written by a robot, yet even a robot knows when to spice things up by having Ron eat Hermione's family. I can't continue reading this. It's just... No.
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I understand this is my first MLP story, so yeah I expected it wouldn't be amazing. I probaly scrwed up a lot I didn't even have an editor at the time so yeah, far enough.
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Yeah this needs rewrite.
I am enjoying this quite a lot. You have explained things nicely.