When Entrepreneur Stuart Middlemis comes across a small cave at the back of his property, he uncovers the key to a 30 y.o mystery which provides more questions about his past then he ever knew existed.
Nice story start. Good pacing and plot development, with just hints at smuttiness. I really like the whole 'free to transform back and forth, but with shifting mental priorities' angle; seems like this will be a real story, which is cool.
When I was in high school most kids addressed each other by their last name (I live in the USA), so whenever I see names like Marcy's I always wonder "Did other students call her George?"
I'm really not sure where this could go.
Nice story start. Good pacing and plot development, with just hints at smuttiness. I really like the whole 'free to transform back and forth, but with shifting mental priorities' angle; seems like this will be a real story, which is cool.
8095973 Thanks! I hope I can live up to expectations with this story :)
Hey I am really enjoying this. Please keep it up. I don't want to see it go on stand by. =D Though don't rush your self.
I have that same toy dangling from my cars rear view mirror!
This is because of Five Score Divided by Four, a story that spawned a ton of similar stories that all started with very little pony.
When I was in high school most kids addressed each other by their last name (I live in the USA), so whenever I see names like Marcy's I always wonder "Did other students call her George?"
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Yep, that's definitely not what I experienced in either the west or Midwest while I was in school.