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Cutie Mark(ed) Crusaders2,629 stories ·499 members

The CMC Make a Mistake

Being a blank flank is one of the worst things in the world. The CMC are determined to escape this fate whatever it takes. They have a plan, a desperate plan, one that might have dire consequences for all of Equestria if it fails.

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Ganondox

Ganondox #1 · Apr 5th, 2017 · 1 · ·

Yes, you did good.

Tolenar

Tolenar #2 · Apr 5th, 2017 · · ·

I am kinda struggling to find coherence between sentences but I must say your grammar has improved quite some. Keep it up and you'll be great at this in no time. You seem to be learning really fast for this being your second language! I applaud you. It must take a lot of time and work to improve at the rate that you are. Looking forward to your next piece.