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Your short description says "fight" school, not "flight" school, made me chuckle at the mental image. :twilightsmile:

8066359 Fixed! Thanks for the quick find!

Dash couldn't bear the idea that she had just accidentally had Fluttershy kissing her own brother for that whole time.

Right. Kissing. :duck:

Anyway, this was both hilarious and sexy. Like brother like sister, eh?

YASS GOD! :raritystarry: Tre fabuleaux!

This was amazing. Great story.

Now I want to see the siblings' reaction when Rainbow accidentally spills the beans in the future :rainbowlaugh::pinkiecrazy::yay:
You simply can't keep something like that for yourself for long or you'll explode... twice :rainbowkiss:

2 year later
:rainbowlaugh: ho dashi!!!! :rainbowderp:

run run dash :rainbowlaugh: my bro is here :yay:

Oh my god, the episode makes sense now.

8067533 That's how I roll. Making senseless sex make sense of the senseless.

I can't really buy this premise, because so what if they can't talk? You know your sibling, especially if you're the younger one and they've been present since you were a baby. The sound of their breathing, the way their fingers (or their hooves) feel, or especially their scent. No way, no way at all, that they don't know each other. At the very least Fluttershy would notice that the stallion she's with smells just like her brother and the feel of his hoof is just like her brother's, and it's only slightly less likely that Zephyr would know her, too.

But, y'know, as excuses for sex go, it's not bad. In fact, the darkness gives them plausible deniability for just having knowingly screwed their sibling. Maybe read it that way?

Bubbler #13 · Apr 2nd, 2017 · · 2 ·

8067625 I'm gonna tell you right now, it is not the norm for siblings to know that much about each other.

8067625 Yeeeah that's not normal. I can tell you that I in fact do not know what my brother smells like, not do I know the sound of his breathing or the 'touch of his fingers' :fluttershyouch:

You have a strange relationship with your siblings...

No. Just no. This is way tocruel to poor Fluttershy.

A romantic saxophone music is Best with this XD

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Huh? What, do you and your siblings maintain a two foot distance at all times? I didn't necessarily mean that stuff in a sexual context, I just mean, like ... when you hug them, there's a way that they tend to hold you, they have mannerisms that you become familiar with. I know the difference between the way my sister strokes my hair and the way my mom does, they do it differently; that's what I'm talking about. And obviously, if you've ever been in physical proximity, you can smell them, right? All humans, or ponies as the case may be, have a unique scent; you don't even have to be a horse to be able to pick up on it, humans can do it too. Why are you calling me weird? Have you never hugged your brothers or sisters? You're making fun of me; you have to know what I'm talking about. Are you really telling me that if they were in a closet with you, you wouldn't know it was them?

I mean ... my sister did kiss me once, I know that was weird. :derpyderp2: But all that other stuff, that's just stuff you would know if you ever touched each other.

8067720 I'm not gonna judge how close you are to your siblings. Whatever relationship you have is your own. But that kind d of closeness to a sibling is not one that I would call a norm.

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C'mon ... I don't want to judge you either, if you're not as physically affectionate with your family, that's just as normal. I just honestly don't believe that 'most' people don't hug their family enough to know them apart from some random person they go to class with. This is a pony that Fluttershy grew up with. So how would she not get some indication that the pony she's kissing is him? Whether it was his scent or his breathing or whatever. He's been around her since she was a baby, he's much more familiar than a classmate.

8067772 i love this fic but if this was irl i would have to agree with you like im not close to my fam but i know a lot that are

It's and its. There is a difference between them.

Also, I have to agree with 8067625. At the very least, we do have to remember that these aren't people, they're ponies, and they have a sense of smell. Fluttershy would recognize that she wasn't kissing who she thought, especially if she's been into Thunderlane for a while and is probably familiar with and expecting his scent.

Poor Fluttershy I do know the pain of others planing a party in your empty place...of course in my case they forgot to tell me >>

Anyway yeah this is hilarious. If you don't mind some incest that is.

well ok that just happened.
a good one shot.

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To her grave. Her grave.

Fluttershy smirked, "Not everypony can be as brave as me Rainbow Dash."

"Yea right." said Dash, giving a tiny shudder.

8067625 Why yes, I will read it that way.
8067675 oh my
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when you hug them, there's a way that they tend to hold you, they have mannerisms that you become familiar with. I know the difference between the way my sister strokes my hair and the way my mom does

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I know you're not implying anything in a sexual connotation. And I get what you are logically trying to argue. But you have to keep in mind the context of your comments (which I find delightful), here on an incest clopfic, with other commentators who have come to read a clopfic. So anything you say can and will be misconstrued into the most sexual possible way.

Welcome to the internet. Enjoy your stay.

Please have a sequel where Fluttershy and Zepher find out the truth.

Please:pinkiesad2:

I'll follow you

thank you for the nightmares.

8067701 As per your request...

Excellently done, my friend. Hot and hilarious! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!

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Oh, I know. You think I'm new to the Incest is Wincest group? Discussions of IRL family have come up before ...

Enjoyed this fic and got a good laugh out of it to boot. :coolphoto:

:pinkiegasp:

The horror, the HORROR!

Now he has more ammo for his ego believing Dash is into him....:rainbowwild:

This was interesting to say the least.

Had to be done. :trollestia:

8069549 no the music I was talking about wasn't this it was like daa da daa da daaa da da daaa da daa da daaa da da.... It was like that and I forgot it's name

"Why does everypony think-"

because bronies

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no the music I was talking about wasn't this it was like daa da daa da daaa da da daaa da daa da daaa da da.... It was like that and I forgot it's name

That is terrible! Seriously.
Luckily I am awesome and telepathic, so I can just read your mind from here.
Careless Whisper, by George Michael is the song you're thinking of:

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Baker Street, Gerry Rafferty, 1978. What you're talking about is at the 24 second mark.

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that was the fist thing that came to my head :rainbowlaugh:

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Amen to that!

Oh, come on. Couldn't you use a normal pairing like Applejack and Big Mac or Twilight and Shining?

Subjecting us to Fluttershy and Zephyr.

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Definitely DO NOT expect me to come up with some sorry bandwagon idea for this.

Good day.

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Nobody is forcing you to read it...

i will be honest, this was awesome :) good story

What did d we learn? NEVER PLAY MATCHMAKER EVER!

Seven minutes, seven minutes is all I can spare to play with you

Seven minutes, seven minutes is all I can spare to play with you

New definition of spray and pray

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