Velveteen Sparkle

MGleaming Sparkle
MLP: FiM
Romance
Comedy
Random
Slice of Life
Twilight decides to let Shining Armor in on her dirty secret. Or Gleaming Shield in this instance.
Sex
Alt. Universe
Twilight
Shining Armor
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mr_shimmer

mr_shimmer #1 · Mar 29th, 2017 · · · A Little Family Fun ·

Spelling error in the last paragraph. I believe you ment 'over' where you have 'lver'

Silver Inkwell

Silver Inkwell #2 · Mar 30th, 2017 · 1 · · A Little Family Fun ·

Just...
DARTH VADER NO!

livinthelife

livinthelife #3 · Mar 30th, 2017 · 1 · · A Little Family Fun ·

More than a few spelling errors, but apart from that the writing was reasonably competent. Your descriptions could use a bit more detail, it came out a bit bland. In general, though, fairly good job.

TheGreatEater

TheGreatEater #4 · Jun 27th, 2017 · 1 · · A Little Family Fun ·

"No more buts, dear." Velvet said sternly, a smirk on her face. "Now do you wish to celebrate our little anniversary, or do you want to stop? I don't want to force this upon you if you really don'r want to."

don't
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Upon hesring Velvet's voice, Twilight closed the gap between them again, licking her mother's lips.

hearing
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The two stood up from the bed and used their magic to lift the covers. It was only a matter of time before Spoke and Starlight came over and neither of them wanted to explain the sudden odor that plagued the room should they enter.

Spike
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TheGreatEater

TheGreatEater #5 · Jun 27th, 2017 · · · Bonus: Mother Knows Best ·

Velvet raised a hoof and stroked Twilight's cheek lovingly, "If you don't want to, I can always as Cadance to help you. But just know, I won't hurt you.

ask
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Look forward to the sequel.

StormLuna

StormLuna #6 · Sep 2nd, 2020 · · · Bonus: Mother Knows Best ·

Twilight Velvet x Twilight Sparkle, always such a sexy ship.

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