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So the entire School was sent through the portal due to a fake Bomb Scare, man that was something, didn't think it would work though, but I thought Sunset would try to put up a fight after finding out they were going to turn her into a sex slave too.
Secret Admirer are the sirens
The only other thing I have to add is on Chrysalis. I am still finding it odd that she is being allowed to act like this when all of the other powerful females have submitted to male dominance. It wouldn't be so jarring to see other females like the alicorns doing this from time to time out of habit or showing her to be manipulative or even having her being punished for her 'old ways'.
Other than that, I do hope that we get to see how the human assimilated into this new culture and seeing who goes with who. Personally, I'm hoping for Double Twilight, Sunset, and Spike
Pretty sure, like Brony-wan-Kenobi, that the sirens are the secret admirers and it makes me wonder how are suppose to be captured if they 'evacuated' the school right after? BTW I loved their dumb plan, every bit of it made me laugh and a little depressed that it MIGHT actually work if someone tries it. Back to the sirens seeing as how many writers set as being thousands of years old and have been living in the human world for centuries wouldn't they be the most idle candidates to help convert the humans? And wouldn't the mare counterparts also help their human counterparts see the light?
BTW also loved the bit where Seta picked up on the wrong Civil War. Or Cloud Kicker is just that bad at history.
Looking forward to the rest of the chapter and have a Happy New Year!
Because this is porn.
PrincipAL.
YIKES.
... TO be fair, that's a damn good movie.
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better than the comic it was based on
The part about feminism was hilarious
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You're not the only one who thinks like that. Chrysalis' behaviour undermines their entire paradigm but everyone pretends it doesn't.
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Yeah and this scene really makes me shake my head since Shining Armor was present. Why didn't he put the anti magic ring on her for forgetting her place. Why didn't Spike spank her in the last chapter for her insults. Why is she still acting like she's the one in control? There are no answers.
Let's hope the next chapter finally answers this or finally provides the world building that I hoped this story would have
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Allegedly, there may or may not be a chapter coming up which may or may contain some further information regarding why they allow her to act like this.
Allegedly.
Maybe.
You didn't see me. I was never here.
/Smokebomb
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Well right now the Sunset nude beach story is seeming more interesting I have to say. Hope it updates soon
Also, maybe the reason is that we can see the Mare Training Program in action
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Well she was the one that pretty much changed everything, so they are giving her some slack.
Both sound like they would make interesting side-story/bonus chapters.
What. just...what? A bomb scare? seriously? I mean, as effective as it is to get everyone out of the school and into the portal, it's still a pretty dumb excuse for Sunset to use. I'm not surprised Chryssy chose it, but Sunset should have protested that more.
So I finally finished this chapter and I gotta say that the feminism bit definitely made up for the whole bomb scare in my opinion. i do hope Seta doesn't turn out to be some kind of spy for Nexia. She's pretty cool and I want her to hook up with Tylus.
I can't wait to see what Chrysalis will do to the Dazzlings (but pls don't kill them like Sombra).
I think you guys are missing the big picture here.
Like why are those students in school while Equestria is celebrating Christmas?
Also, if you've been paying attention to the news, Trump's button is bigger than North Korea's!
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Agreed. These were things I was hoping this story would be about. Instead of doing the Seta Starlight bit, focus on world building while the former queen does her thing in the human world. Or have her go to the zebras, griffins, and so on if this is about showing the world she's back.
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What is the abundance of changeling magic messing with the time flow between worlds or something?
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We might get those as Bonus chapters later on. Right now I think Very Sleepy just wants to focus on moving the plot along.
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While I understand that, the plot really hasn't been moving at all. The other hives are moving into other lands and instead of being in a race to see who can corrupt them first, we are taken to the human world. It just feels like the story is dragging it's feet, bring up interesting things and ideas but never doing anything with them.
When I first heard about this sequel I was hoping we'd get a chapter on each of the main characters and how things had changed in Equestria while also seeing more of the world. Maybe having Rainbow, lightning, and a few Changelings going after the griffins. Stuff like that. While I am enjoying this story, I just think it could be better
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Me too, heck I wanted to see some of the Mane Six going to visit other lands to convince them into allying with the new Equestria.
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That would be awesome! Or a new version of the Cutie Map that sends them to those mares who are having trouble accepting their new lives. Or use the map to help them find new master's for the mares
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Say just out of curiosity, which character would want to have a one-shot side story? Me, I kind of want one where Rarity goes to apologize to the Diamond Dogs.
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Well there are a few to be honest. I'd love to see Twilight bring in some zebra's like what was mentioned in one bonus story or have her helping Moondancer to trust males as the doms. I'd also set Applejack and Apple Bloom with the buffalos where they could do some body painting. Scootaloo and Gabby working on the griffons would be nice while Rainbow heads over to help convert the hippogryphs. Or have Luna doing that instead.
Other ideas are seeing the CMC getting a master or having Big Mac adjusting to Changeling society
Welp. After Hawaii, I guess we all owe Chrysalis and Sunset an apology. Their plan wasn't so silly after all.
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Did anyone check to see how many High Schoolers were abducted in the chaos?!
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No idea. I do wonder, also, if you would do well to add the "Death" tag. There's been a graphic, bloody murder on-screen. Unless Sombra somehow survived the stabbing, that is. With how magic seeps in from Equestria, that's not completely out of the question.
On the other hand, story tags can be weird. I've read fics with characters burned to death in a furnace or literally butchered for meat, and in both cases, the authors were adamant in their refusal to add the "Gore" tag.
I don't know how to proceed from this, to be honest. You did tell someone there wouldn't be death, right? But there is one. Probably. What is your opinion on this?
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Chrysalis is getting a bit out of control. I don't think she would follow my rules even if I told her too.
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There are always ways to get her back in line. A few hours with the breaking-dildo. A few days, if her mind can take it. Perhaps that's what Chrysalis is crying out for, some serious punishment to put her in her place again. The stocks are still standing ready for her.