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After a long wait, it's finally here! Despite it being my longest chapter yet, the entire thing didn't actually take that long to write. Just needed the right motivation. I had forgotten how much I missed writing about main characters.
Now I'm kind of curious how the rest of you all want to see the story off of into. We could shoot straight into the next Dragon arc. Or we could linger a bit and explore the humans getting accustomed to their new lives there as they discover what a school of sex is really like.
Or we could even explore the random adventures of a certain crystal alicorn and changeling queen. Finally see what a drunk Chrysalis is like...
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Well, I'd probably like a little more of the school before diving into the next big thing. Drunk night on the town does sound interesting too... so, let's say
School of Friendship With Benefits>Drunkalis>Dungeons for Dragons
But all very, very close!
New chapter yay ^-^
That's one way to answer.
Quite.
You would.
You're gonna have to accept the blame this time.
Yeah, he ain't.
And a monstrous tyrant who enslaved a whole race, got trapped under the ice alongside his kingdom, frozen in time for a thousand years, and then blasted by the Crystal Heart courtesy of Spike and Twilight. But yeah, he wasn't a nice guy.
Wait what?
This is going to lead to a Who's On First, I can tell.
You know that's about how I'd react, I will admit.
Make them.
Shakespeare's overrated anyway.
... That's, kinda sad. She needs a HUG.
Around.
Oh WOW.
This fic is like the Killing Bites anime. It knows what it is, it doesn't pretend to be high art, and it's clear the one behind it is having a lot of fun. And while it does raise eyebrows now and again, nothing major.
Klingons eat their food alive, and they're aliens, one might make the argument that ponies are aliens in a sense, of course they're going to seem weird.
There's an art to carefully choosing your words so you're not actually lying.
Naturally.
It also helps that ponies are more friendly by nature than humans, mostly due to the tale of the Windigos. It's possible it's just a story, but Nightmare Moon was a story, so it's very possible that they were very real and that the play is just a more, general public friendly, version of the events.
It is. That's kinda the idea.
Beyond don't permanently scar them, physically or otherwise.
Cute. Real cute.
Not INaccurate.
And she is fucking SCARY.
Well hopefully it doesn't involved Garble. Because I don't think ANYONE likes him.
Noooooo! Fuck noooooo!
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I personally would like to see more of the humans, maybe even some of the counter parts interacting with each other?
Another chapter, more decently written sex.
Got to say, this has me genuinely curious as to what Changelings/Chrysalis would do if they found someone who was...asexual. No interest in sex whatsoever, if anything they're grossed out by it. And if they did get talked into it, after all is said and done, they still find it distasteful.
I wouldn't mind a chapter or two more dealing with the humans in sex school to see how they were adjusting before going to the dragon lands.
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It depends on what order they happen in the story. The bar seems to happen first so lets go with that and then the planing or the adaptation. I do what to see more but I also want a good story.
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I definitely want to get to the dragons, but maybe a semi epilogue for the humans? At the very least have the counterparts interact with each other and perhaps compare masters or each other's techniques?
I could do with at least an aside on the drunk Chrysalis shenanigans tho. Also, will we get to see what happens to the Dazzlings, or are they not in Equestria now? I'm a little unclear on that.
But after all that, get Ember into Spike's harem! Garble can go fuck himself. Either put Torch back in power or Spike takes the Scepter (since he did technically win it in the ep)
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Yeah that Sirens went through the portal and ended up with the rest of the school in Equestria. They just weren't included with the rest of them in this chapter because of what they did. I know I didn't make their part that clear.
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It's probably something similar to if they found a homosexual man. They would probably think someone in insanely wrong with the individual and try their best at fixing them with some kind of generalization on how all living creatures should feel the urge to reproduce and make babies.
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True, but it'd challenge their perceptions in a fun way. Might be even funner if you introduced a character who is truly asexual, like a golem lacking reproductive parts of any variety or something along those lines.
Yeah, I know this is a fic about sex, but you've established these people have a compulsive need to reassure themselves that their way of sexuality is the right one. The obvious next step is to keep challenging that.
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Ah, okay. I hope they aren't executed. They are good breeding stock. Maybe breeding stockades for a few months? Or teasing/orgasm denial for the same amount of time? Make them apologize to the rest of CHS by letting them use their bodies as they saw fit? Just pls no killing them.
So is Luna now Flash's slave or what?
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That is a good point. Chryalis can call it however she likes she is a hypocrite. But we saw that with Blueblood. Sure, the Changlings can strut in and take any mare they want with just a little lust magic and slow brainwashing but FAUST FORBID the stallions do the same thing. That always worked my nerves in the last story.