Ideas not a chapter
Okay so these ideas popped into my head and I wanted to know what you thought... okay so far only one idea but can go in two ways.
First is that same character and all that same feelings same beginning but gets sent to ponyville before twilight is sent there by the princess. When I find this out however I want to change everything for the better or try at least. Though as always things never go as planned, but somehow the ending is still the same like it was meant to happen no matter what.
Second is same scenario and all that but instead of wanting to change things just leave it the same and try to stay out of the way, and see what happened behind the scenes. Only to be along when I know I'm needed kinda like doctor who with the fixed points in time theory.
Please tell me what you think in the comments bellow and thank you for reading.
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I would say to keep the story like it is and with a bit better writing you could salvage it.
949897 true but it would be a lot easier on me and I'd be able to do it more often but at the same time it takes out the fun of making a new story. I'll wait for other opinions before i do anything
Story is generic blah blah blah. But really, with a few changes to the character and general plot, this could become an interesting read. I may hate the premise from overuse, but i want to see this continue (for some reason.)
934032 Well excuse me princess! Apparently critiquing is a no-no nowadays. I mean, why try to better authors when we could just blindly dry-hump the shit they make. I mean shit man, an internet user is annoyed we critiqued something, SOCIETY IS RUINED FOREVER!
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937987 I'm sorry to be the one to tell you this, i really am, but Love and Tolerance hasn't meant jack squat since it stopped being used for it's original purpose. Also, the only hate i could see came from Epsilonic memory, and that was directed towards the comments.
950072 wow' rage king with the right wingyness gay! Stupid auto correct