♫ Do you want to build an airship? ♫
Nightsong, a Cloudsdale weather factory worker, has been looking for a way out of the nightmarish work within the rainbow factory. One night she gets her chance, but will she be able to return to a normal life?
Sorry about the short description, but i'm terrible at these things.
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This is a much more sensible idea than Rainbow Factory, it kinda makes sense for the ponies to make use of the dead rather than let them rot in the ground. Sure some ponies would think it's disrespectful but I don't think I'd mind being turned into a rainbow if I died
. The original's idea was also rather unsustainable, so at least this makes sense. Your writing style could however use just a little bit of work with explaining what's happening to those who haven't read the original story and for characterization. The story felt like it passed too quickly and could have expanded on the effect that it has on the main character in a deeper psychological context. Anyways I will track and hope to read some more :3
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Glad you liked it, and yeah, i thought that using the dead would be a better idea than using the living, well that and I don't wanna get too grimdark. I mean, i still would like people to read this without having to find somewhere to go panic after a chapter
well there is more comming, and i may go back and add more, the time in the factory isn't going to be the main portion of this one.
I really like this story :) keep up the good work
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Thanks, although i'll warn you that i'm gonna be winding down the action for a little while in a chapter or two, but don't worry i'm gonna have some occasional moments such as this chapter.
I am just wondering if this story will continue? Cuz this was some good story right here!