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This story is a sequel to The Siren's Remorse


After having survived the prison world through the magic mirror, the Dazzlings joined forces with other banished in order to return. Having learned to come to terms with their own issues, they befriended the human Twilight whose become inflicted with a magical condition.

Adagio intends to fix her little secret weapon against the Princess of Friendship before embarking on her conquest of Equestria. Though none else seem to support her drive to take over the kingdom, can the human Twilight save Adagio from her pursuit of vengeance for her family the ponies took away from her? Or will the leader of the Dazzlings enslave every pony and then the world of Equis? Can the human Twilight find the cure to her unstable magic and learn it in time to help as the end draws near?

What will the exiles that she helped bring through, do to the peaceful world of ponies and magic? Is there really a threat of wish granting demons that even Discord is helping along Sunset who jumped through to Equestria coming true? Will Sunset find it in herself to overcome her hesitance and self loathing to help her home in its greatest time of need?

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 30 )

8276979
He's still in the story, he'll pop up soon enough.

8276971
The next chapter is in the works, glad you're enjoying the story its a fun thing for me to craft.

YAY NEW CHAPTER! Like Christmas came early! Really early...

No I've read it and can't wait for more!

8306655
Welp I'll just reread the series again!

YAY NEW CHAPTER! ALSO YAY FOR OTHER REASONS! I can't wait to learn why yellow isn't talking. I'm betting it has something to do with him using his dragon blood before.

8327038
You'll find out soon though hints in his past in book 1.

8327319
What? The term "Book 1" has confused me.

8328508
The Sirens Remorse, this one you're reading is the main sequel with 'Resurgence of the Dazzlings'

While I am not most interested in anyone outside our main bunch I enjoy your writing enough to read though it.

8345762
They will play a very important part in the relationship between Adagio and Scitwi turned siren. Think of them as pawns in a chess game being played by the forces of good and evil?

8345877
Oh that's how I look at it. Don't think I don't like them I do. It's just the sirens and the gang overshadow them in how much I want to know about them by orders of magnitude.

8346076
Yes I understand there's going to be a whole lore about the sirens I have planned out, since as we know through the story Adagio and the others have minimal cultural knowledge of their own species besides the short do's and don'ts their parents told them about. Yet considering how old they are that tends to be buried by time.

So many answered questions. Thanks again for a wonderful chapter!

There are a few errors, I think. At the beginning you said

person modification

Shouldn't that be "personal"?
Also you kept using vassal but I'm fairly certain you meant vessel. As twi being midnight's vassal would mean mid was in control of twi.

8439625
Just realized I submitted the draft form... saved multiple times separate files and chose the wrong one. *slaps forehead*

Sonnava...gun. Thanks for pointing this out before more saw the errors. Correcting shortly.

8439640
What's the point of being a loyal reader if I wasn't helpful; at least on occasion?

Wow. CANNOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT INSTALLMENT

The wait was worth it! I’m wowed as ever!

8662022
It was a nice little new installent. I’m curious to see how the involvement of Discord is going to affect things. I also, for once, am interested in how sunset will divelop. I can’t wait for what comes next.

9184561
Sorry about that, I had planned to edit this story too. Never got around to it. Ch 1 is back up for viewing unedited.

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