“Don't walk in front of me — I may not follow; don't walk behind — I may not lead; walk beside me and just be my friend.” - Albert Camus
Time. It's the thing that makes everything tick. When Astral Spark, a student at the University of Canterlot, experiences brief glitches, stops in time, is it a sign that time itself is breaking down?
Written as a result of a recent writer's block.
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A...a crossover with Quantum Break?! HELL YEAH!
I was wondering when someone would do this!
I haven't read the story nor played the game, but I really love the concept and I like everything I've seen of the game so far. I'll make sure to check this later
P.S. Assuming this is a Quantum Break crossover, you might wanna add a crossover tag.
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Not quite a crossover with Quantum Break, but definitely influenced by it. I hope you enjoy the story when you get around to it
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That's what I meant. Still, you're free whether you want the crossover tag or not. Though I recommend adding this story to the Game Crossovers group, since people there would obviously be interested in any story related to video games.
That was pretty neat! Colour me intrigued, I'm going to be keeping an eye on this one.
Could do with another editing run, though. There's a couple places where your tenses get mixed up, most notably the last few sentences, and the occasional off word.
I see I'm not the only one with this problem.
Ive only seen one other Quantum Break referenced story. Sadly, it was cancelled. Glad to see another here :D
Should be sugary, but apart from that error, this story genuinely looks good - the concept and the writing - and I hope to see more!
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Thanks!
Great start! Definitely gonna track this. Also (I don't know why I always ask this question) when does this story take place in the show's timeline?
off (or off of)
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Judging by Twilight being at Donut Joe's and not yet a princess, plus Luna Avenue's "newfound" popularity, I would venture a guess of sometime in season 1.
I like it so far. :) More please!
Did writing this story succeed in getting yourself over your writer's block?
You've caught my interest so far.
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Yep, but unfortunately I have class right now so I can't continue writing just yet
DER JUDE!!!
7999832 hmkmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
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Yes! I love this idea!
(Side note - why do you always steal all the best ideas?
)
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It's not on purpose I swear
This is awesome! When will this be updated!
Very curious! Tracking!
Hmm.
It has seems that my absurd fascination of time and space is tingling in this one.
Tracked and liked
Story needs exactly one hundred and ten more words on its first chapter
Hmm... unsure if he's viewing a memory or is somehow a reincarnation/clone of Starswirl...
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Guess you'll have to wait and see
When the next chapter eventually arrives, that is.
Yes!
I always seem to like your stuff, and this might actually be my favorite story. I just had hoped it wasn't turning out to be a one-shot. (After all, it is just a writer's block cure.)
Well, I hope to see a chapter to edit soon!
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Coincidentally, right now I am sort of experiencing a writer's block. But don't worry, I'll be getting plenty more of them in the future