Amber Stone looked honest enough, but Shining Armor knew that the sweet accent and even those big brown ingénue eyes of hers were all a lie. There was nothing wholesome or proper about the mare and he couldn't wait to expose her for what she was.
8027343 Oh so a Fanfic inspired by a trailer for move adaptation of a fanfic written about characters from a book about pretty boy vampires and teen girls with no personalty. Sorry playing 6 Degrees of Separation here, congratulations 6 points connecting MLP to Twilight that have nothing to do with names!
Honestly I know nothing about 50 Shades of Grey, never read it, seen it or anything. What turned me off at first was reading the description and the opening chapter, it really really seemed like Shining Armor was going to do some mind break raping shit and I was NOT about that in the least. I just wanted a nice true slice of life sequel to Idyllic. You can imagine my surprise when I stumbled upon this today. I was actually torn on reading this and the only thing that made me continue were your clarifying comments in the first chapter.
You said Shining Armor wasn't evil, just more direct. So I trusted in that and took the plunge. This is literally all I wanted and screw canon, why are there not more Chyssie x Shiny stories?
-edit I should mention I am reading this from my phone, since the new update to the site everything is all weird and different so I don't even know what tags are in this story but Im confident now that tragedy and dark is not one of them and I would have been less hesitant in reading had I seen all the tags. Oh that and naming your story Ruin is pretty fucking ominous, the combination of that and your story description does you no favors.
So this is a fabric based on a movie based on fanfic based on Twilight? I mean we all know 50 Shades started as a Twilight fanfic right?
Great chapters, I like this turn of events.
I just hope things end well for the three of them.
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Not really. Its not based on 50 Shades of Grey. Seeing previews for the new movie just kinda put me in the mood to write, I guess.
8027343 Oh so a Fanfic inspired by a trailer for move adaptation of a fanfic written about characters from a book about pretty boy vampires and teen girls with no personalty. Sorry playing 6 Degrees of Separation here, congratulations 6 points connecting MLP to Twilight that have nothing to do with names!
I have a question, Why do people give a shit what the inspiration for this was?
It literally has nothing to do with the quality of the work.
This is fantastic. I want more.
love this fic hope you do more
Honestly I know nothing about 50 Shades of Grey, never read it, seen it or anything. What turned me off at first was reading the description and the opening chapter, it really really seemed like Shining Armor was going to do some mind break raping shit and I was NOT about that in the least. I just wanted a nice true slice of life sequel to Idyllic. You can imagine my surprise when I stumbled upon this today. I was actually torn on reading this and the only thing that made me continue were your clarifying comments in the first chapter.
You said Shining Armor wasn't evil, just more direct. So I trusted in that and took the plunge. This is literally all I wanted and screw canon, why are there not more Chyssie x Shiny stories?
-edit I should mention I am reading this from my phone, since the new update to the site everything is all weird and different so I don't even know what tags are in this story but Im confident now that tragedy and dark is not one of them and I would have been less hesitant in reading had I seen all the tags. Oh that and naming your story Ruin is pretty fucking ominous, the combination of that and your story description does you no favors.
D'awwww... Me likey.
To be honest, it took me that long to read this because of the mention of 50 shades putting me off and making me hesitate to start reading.
'the stallion took her heights she hadn’t been to in a long time' - her to heights