After graduating first in his class at a hair styling academy, Zephyr Breeze is more confident than ever that he can win over Rainbow Dash. Can her human friend help her find a solution to get the message across to the stubborn stallion?
It's actually funny that whenever someone (a character or IRL) has two explanations for some behaviour, they tend to go with the worse one. But, paradoxically, I think it actually makes sense. When sitting and hearing leaves rustling, the caveman that went to check it out tended to live longer than the one that assumed it was 'just the wind'.
"It looks like she's into me" isn't very actionable (all you have to do is nothing - it's her turn now), whereas "this is something I need to fix" is - at least vaguely...
Why isn't there a Zephyr Breeze tag?
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Thanks again for the catch I never liked that word. I expect that your vigilance will find many more errors in the days to come.
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Couldn't find it when I first posted. Updated, thanks.
8062326 Because, like Rainbow, we all want him gone?
You are part of the rebel appliance and a traitor.
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Holding him is dangerous. If word of this gets out, it could generate sympathy for the rebellion in the cupboard.
It's actually funny that whenever someone (a character or IRL) has two explanations for some behaviour, they tend to go with the worse one. But, paradoxically, I think it actually makes sense. When sitting and hearing leaves rustling, the caveman that went to check it out tended to live longer than the one that assumed it was 'just the wind'.
"It looks like she's into me" isn't very actionable (all you have to do is nothing - it's her turn now), whereas "this is something I need to fix" is - at least vaguely...
"You wander the snack isle..." I believe "isle" is supposed to be "aisle". Same goes for later in the same paragraph.