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Moving On

Twilight always knew AJ was a strong pony- she just never realized her strength was far more than physical.

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Taliesin

Taliesin #1 · Jul 6th, 2012 · · ·

Nice story. Very nice indeed.

Future Regret

Future Regret #2 · Jul 6th, 2012 · · ·

You wrote the accent in very well. Many people can, but when they can't it's just awful. Good story and hardly any spelling errors.

Radboy16

Radboy16 #3 · Jul 6th, 2012 · · ·

Havent read it yet, but knowing you it will be great.
My Guess:
5/5

Edit: Good Job!

k12314

k12314 #4 · Jul 7th, 2012 · · ·

... Oh my God, I'm tearing up, and that's hard to do. This- It really fits AJs personality, to be honest. She always seems like there's something else in her head asides from what she's saying, you know? And this, well... It fits. And it made me shed a tear.