love the idea that Oryx made those who were guilty in a way his Taken

would love to see more of this

ORYX!

My dreams are fulfilled!

Long live the King.

I love a good story where the caribou get curb stomped.

8145056

You and me both, I just love these kinds of stories, for some reason when I read them I always hear this one phrase in the back of my mind 'There's a plan in everything, and I love it when a plan comes together.' I don't know why I hear that phrase when I read these kinds of FoE stories but I think it is perfect for them.

So awesome

Well the caribou are fucked and out of all the FoE stories out there they one were they are slaughtered by beings for more power full are the best

8145351 That is so true, though I wouldn't mind seeing a FoE story where the 'Hero' isn't super powerful, unless you call Deadpool powerful, he has that super healing ability and his natural ability to fight with any weapon he can get his hands on, now I would LOVE to see him in a FoE story, maybe he goes into said story after having been a MLP fan since it first came out and when he finds an FoE world he goes there to take care of the Caribou and free the ponies then.

Oryx I think might be a little OOC, but I'll let that slide for now.
Then again, his previous life(?) (when he was a woman) might react like that.

Praise the King!!

Hey tooschooolforcool,

I wonder if we could add your story to the Post-Fall / Crossover folder of Schorl Tourmaline's Real Fall of Equestria Fan Group.

I hope you continue the story. In related words:

Good, let the wrath of Oryx spread far and wide....

Dainn, here is a message for you and your scum:

Reaction on Dainn's allies when they see Oryx for the first time:

8149051 Yeah, totally. sounds cool.

8147813 I do agree with you, and i think that i may have gone a little too OOC with how he acts, but i feel like since he's just died, he's gotten a bit of a shock to his system, which kind of bring him back to how he used to act before he became the Taken King. Rest assured, there'll be plenty of good old fashioned Oryx is a cruel sociopathic god who loves genocide in this story. He's just gotta get his groove back.

8148274 You know it.

More please.

More

8152002 please for all thats holy and hell update.

please for the love of all that is divine or demonic continue this story!

Welp. Dain is screwed.

Long live the Taken King!

Holy shit pls continue the story.

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Haha YES!!! Those fricks don't won't ever be able to figure out the complicated bomb detonation techniques needed to beat him!!!

Caribou, gotta catch em all!

ALL HAIL THE TAKEN KING, LIGHT EATER AND WILL TAKER!!
ALL HAIL ORYX!!!!

more pls

*CRAZY LAUGHTER* AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!

8145056
Yep, but you kniw what would be even better? If there was a story before FoE even takes place, a displaced suddenly pops in, accidentally kills Dainn (by suddenly flying in or something idk.), and becomes the leader of the caribou. That would be something.😁

Y'know, Willbreaker is one of the most straight-up badass sword names I have ever come across.

pls update it is a vary good story whit a lot of promise to be great

In all honesty, A god-being strong enough to bring Oryx, that one also demonic God-being that is at least 4.6 Billion Years old, since at least a Statue in the Dreadnaught predates the Sol-system, destroyed countless worlds and had most likely a couple Billion soldiers/slaves on his Hand, back to life but can't do shit about the Caribou is a bit far-fetched . Furthermore, I just can't imagine oryx being scared of anything. Furious, hesitant, sad, yes but not scared.

Taking the introduction out of consideration, I really enjoyed this chapter. Definitely a great idea

More please

8460823
or a dark signer from yugioh 5ds

8501262
Not really as most gods would have pacts to not intervene directly in thier creations lifes

You have my attention