Hmmm, intriguing.

Carry On

READING, BRB!

Pipsqueak! Rumble!

I see the S.S. ScootaRumble on the horizon captain! Oh and I may be sensing some AppleSqueak as well, the recent story Earth & Sky has made that a recent favorite of mine.

Wait, wait, looks like it's the H. M. S. Jump-to-Conclusions! Abandon ship!

Poor Spike, poor Sweetie Belle, blocked at every turn.

This sounds epic, just finished reading the chapter in song of whispers, cant wait to read this one

GASP!  He's ALIVE!  TO THE POPCORN!

Aww, poor Spike. At least give him the satisfaction of getting a kiss from Sweetie Belle before he never sees the light of day again.

To tired to read tonight will read this tomorrow. after reading his other stories 2-3 times I expect this to be good.

Oh this is fantastic. I can't wait for more. I guess i night have to go back & read the other stories you said interact with this one at some point too.

Wait. Did Sweetie Belle just lose her cutie mark?

>>863518863518 Uh... no? how'd you come to that conclusion?

>>863518863518

Uh, What do you mean?

I like where this is going...                         YOU ARE

SO DEAD,

MISTER!

Looks like he got...

( •_•)

( •_•)>⌐■-■

(⌐■_■)

Dared to death.

YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!!!

>>863518863518

I think he meant mark as in target/victim not mark as in "cutie"

Oh wow!! I am SO watching this!! It was well written, the characters were all believable and it had Rumble and Pip (so cute!!!) and truth or dare and calling Celestia FAT. Awesome!! Keep going!

Sweetie Belle stayed behind to lament the regrettable loss of the opportunity of a lifetime, her mark disappearing in a lavender flash.

>>863656863656

Her Mark being Spike. AKA Her target for kissing.

Ohhhhhhhh. Okay. Wow. That scared me for a sec. I seriously thought you guys were going to make this a dramatic story too despite the description.

>>863689863689 It may have its serious moments, but on the whole I want to keep this one fun, kind of an escape from the serious tone of my other stories.  Especially when Rarity and Pinkie's drama starts, there's gonna need to be something to keep readers' spirits up.  

Oh Pinkie... I hope she's not gunna do anything really insane. I'm dieing to know what she was talking about when she was talking to Rarity in the shower...

I actually thought Celestia would have a sense of humor! If he had send it as Spike he would live! All in all this is going to be fun.

woohoo! yet another side story! cary on on, my good stallion, for i have fics to read and LOL's to be uttered!

And Spike is FUUUUCKED

Yeah, calling a goddess/god fat is a great way to end up like Odysseus. Poor Spike he is shit creek without a paddle as he invoked the wrath of the two creatures responsible for bringing him into the world in the first place. There is no way he can blame that letter on the cmc; it was their dare, but he decided to take things too far with the message.   

>>863303863303 Uh, isn't it SooctaSqueak and AppleRumble?

>>864976864976 Yeah, it was running commentary while I read, and those were my immediate assumptions.  Thus the bit about the H. M. S. Jump-to-Conclusions.

>>865399865399 Oh, okay.

Hey, Cerulean, this is in the "Popular Stories" list on the main page. As it should be. Congrats once again.

Dude, I am SOOOOOO looking forward to this. How often will it update?

>>865399865399

I have another two vessels you can add to you fleet, the H.M.S These-Stories-Are-Awesome, and

the H.M.S I-Keep-Refreshing-The-Story-Pages-For-An-Update-At-Least-Every-2-Hours.

I must also add that I found these stories, and many others, from your user page, and am quite

happy that I did, and more than a few of them are on my read later list!!

So I guess thanks for putting links to them there.

>>866575866575 Awesome! I'm glad to hear that someone has gotten some use out of my crazy lists.

>>866055866055 It will likely be sporadic, since it can't exceed past whatever day my main series is on, but what will likely happen is once I finish Song of Whispers, the time jump between that fic and my next will be used to get most of the CMC stuff done, though I think the story itself won't end until after the start of Rarity's fic.  I wish I could give a more solid answer.

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My body and mind are ready and waiting for moar.

I'm actually working on a scootasqueak. and Rumble is one of the main characters.

... First? SWEETIE BELLE IS BEST CRUSADER!

(There! THAT should get some comments going! XD)

Captain! The awkward levels! They're rising dramatically!!

Aww Pip. He is just so adorable!! And I like how practically everypony in this needs to have their heads readjusted. No threatening colts Applejack! Or Scootaloo's dad! Actually, given the male to female ratio in Ponyville you'd think it would be the other way around!!

So glad you updated! This is really adorable and fun!

You had me at the promise of potential SweetieXSpike.

>>885346885346

You have scared Cerulean into hiding lol.

<--- My current state

this is just to funny 5/5 dashies

Evidently, Celestia doesn't even have to send Pipsqueak to the moon.  He's such a space cadet, he could get there himself.  

Oh Pipsqueak...

I just about died when Twilight told Spike and Sweetie Belle that they could kiss

A quote from ASDF movie 5 coordinated to pony format.

Girl(Sweetie Belle): "It's so beautiful out here."

Guy(Spike): "Yeah it's just me, you, & the moon."

Moon(Twilight): "Hey! You two should kiss!"

I love this, it's just too cute. All the potential ships!! I guess it's good Pips a pirate..............

awesome chapter! but how, in the name of celestias rainbow pastel beared, DO YOU POST A BUCKING PICTURE

double post

aaaaaaawwwwwwww

Ah pip is the best XD SweetieXSpike is best ship!

Great story and developement, I will continue reading.

One problem with spelling that I noticed:

"galked"

It's spelled, "Gawked"

Great job otherwise.

This was a good chapter, but I can't wait for more Whispers.

D'awww!

Cute

Other than what the first to said. Yay for the new chapter.

Yus. I love it. Good developement. I'd say something funny, but it wouldn't be funny at all. So... I'm Batman.

Rumble is so awesoem!  And I think Pipsqueak might have taken one too many blows to the head from all of his sword fights.....

>>961058961058  Which is strange, since Rumble is the one plowing into things head first.

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...

...

Also, polygamy.  That's new.  To each his own I suppose, although Thunderlane seems to have more than his fair share of "own."  I believe the proper term is "swag."  Isn't that what all the hip kids are calling it?

Pirate Pipsqueak is the best pony XD

Rumble, if you accidentally upset Applebloom, it's gonna take Celestia, and maybe even Luna, to save you.

Yay Know that song is of whispers is done i can look forward to more of these. her have a mustache good man  in fact take two

humming his own theme to himself Pipsqueak has his own theme song? All of my yes!

Huh, well that's interesting. Don't always see the herd approach to pony relationships.

>>966993966993

Hmmm. We may have to go into detail as to why he is with both of them then.

Have a cookie.

>>967358967358

So the plan for Ruby you and Cerulean have come up with,

is a love triangle using Rumble and Applebloom?

Also Thunderlane with Flitter and Cloudchaser?

So much for Thunderlame!!

Cool dude, , cool.

Woah, was concerned there for a second about Pipsqueak living in the hospital, was wondering what foalhood disease he might have.

Then again, a hospital isn't the same thing as an orphanage, and he could have something wrong with him in addition to being an orphan...

You know, after the last chapter where you did the little bit of back story on Rumble's family (they need a whole story now.  srsly.) all I could think is that now Storm and RD won't have a monopoly on walking in on their family in awkward situations.  I'm not counting anything that happens to Cerulean since him being awkward is a given at this point.

And since you're writing a story about awkward adolescent ponies, have an awkward family picture!

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Huzzah!  The awkward has been doubled!

>>972402972402

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Ni-ice.

Here, have a mega-chapter!  I'm feeling generous.  

EDIT: Oh, and Aziraphael?  I second Omi's response to your post.

I literally just finished the last chapter.  i love you right now.  

Mega chapter?! I guess I can work on my story later

If someone asks me for treasure, I'll point them to this fic.

This fic is pure gold!

I love how you wrote this! :)

Long and satisfying, and two chapters in less than an hour(or so).

Keep it up~ ;)

So Rumble has Ruby Pinch and Apple Bloom interested in him.  He apparently takes after his brother.  

OH MY GOSH, PIPSQUEAK!!

“I’m covering my eyes so they stop looking at you!  It’s not my fault.  I’m a pirate; I’m always looking for pretty things!”

BEST PICK-UP LINE EVER!!!!!!!

Man, that boat is a goner.

it rejected her proposal with all the vehemence that a moldy skiff could, the starboard side detaching completely and falling flat

Oh god, the breakfast scene with Pipsqueak and Scootaloo, I'm not sure if it could possibly have been funnier.

And Rumble is off to a good start, can't wait to read the dinner scene.

I love how Applebloom was getting on to inanimate objects almost the entire time.

Also, two chapters within a few hours of each other? How did you know it was my birthday?

That scene with Scoots and Pip was one of the funniest thing i have seen in years

she recalled blinking once before she was seated in front of the colt with a hoof outstretched and ready to tussle his mane that she couldn’t help but notice looked quite soft.

I think it must run in the family......

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“I’m covering my eyes so they stop looking at you!  It’s not my fault.  I’m a pirate; I’m always looking for pretty things!”

And this line right here earns Pipsqueak one extra-strength Swagaloo.

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Ha ha, Scootaloo's embarrassed~! It's a very cute kind of embarrassment, though.

Well done with the connections between the younger ponies; I especially like Rumble and Applebloom.

"Being several months pregnant..."

"...and climbing in beside her husband, Silver Moonshine,..."

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WHAT? WHATISTHISWORLDCOMINGTO?!

Great job by the way.

"Ever since I got my Cutie Mark..."

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Okay, SERIOUSLY! How much time has gone by in this fic?!

>>982764982764

There is a entire series. And time wise from the beginning of the series to this point... around 3 years or so. give or take a few months

>>974129974129

Wait. What?

>>10144131014413

I misread that really badly ignore it.

Rarity just went into a shit-fit can't wait to see how that turns out.

Oh and good stuff as usual, i was wondering when this would come and then it did

Sweetie's parents better RUN!!

If I were in Storms place, I'd be straight to Starfall Tavern and see if Silver had

any drinks to erase memories!!!!

Can't wait to see AJ's reaction when she hears about Thunderlane and

his "partners", that will be an interesting conversation!!!

And wouldn't like to be Rarity's parents right now, that just screams

run away really really fast!!!

I just saw you in the "Featured" box! Great work!

Curses Twilight, you ruined a first kiss.

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Awesome chapter as always!

It's ass-kicking time!!!!

Awesomeness! That is all.

I saw this in the feature box and was like "Finally". I CANT wait to see where this is gunna go

Spike kissing Sweetie in the end

With the allure of a rogue, the voice of a lark, and a smile sure to knock anypony’s socks clean off, Pipsqueak wrapped Storm’s hoof in his own just like he had Scootaloo’s, flashed his pearly whites, and ruined Storm’s day.

HAHAHAHAHAHAA!!  Pure WIN.  Though I'm a little surprised Storm took it so badly.  Especially considering what he did to Shining Armor that one time.  I guess he just can't handle being on the receiving end of things .

>>10419001041900

That was at the time a possible life or death emergency.

and i thought flutterrage was scary....

Wow, Pipsqueak just lives in his own world doesn't he. Also, he is starting to seem a bit manic or something, I suspect sad things to come.

“Not now, Spike.  Rarity is ranting,”

Next chapter sound like it's going to be glorious.

>>10420291042029

Thank you. I was waiting to see someone point that line it. It is the most Glorious line from Rarity EVER!