the group of friends run into more of AJ's extended family and end up roling in the hey. raity finds a gorup of fans that enjoyed her more riskay outfits from her bimbo days. Spike meets some die hard find/worhipers that are exploring equestrai and the girsl get joules and competivie. We take a bit of time out to see how the cuite mark crusaders are doing. (im thinking their raiding their elder siblins private stashes toys and mags). last but not least Luna drema escapabes. can be by her self and of couse helping the gorup deal with their desires (or pushing them off the edge >;P ) infact maybe luna ask the CMC to help her get her young lover.
Looking at this story now, It's heard to believe the first story involved Spike and the bimbo 6 trying to flirt and seduce him and ends up getting them all pregnant. and now It has the Spike and the mane 6 trying to stop this evil person from turning equestria in bimbos again. That a little bit of Mood whiplash. especially since everything now is taking more seriously than what happen in the previous story.
I enjoyed Spike's Bimbo Filled Life, but that story had some character problems that couldn't entirely be explained away by plot. There are some things that were just ignored in that story, go back and read it again and you'll know what I'm talking about, that ironically are now more evident thanks to this one. Because all that, both stories suffer.
8359972 Fuck man that's like an actual solid critique. I know you said that if I go back and read SBFL I would understand what character problems I ignored but it's difficult for me to come at my own story with an analytical eye like a reader would. If you give me some examples of what I ignored it might help me get a general idea of what I missed. Thanks.
I liked this chapter, but you're really leaving me wanting more, sir. Also, is it a bad thing that I want Spike to have another growth spurt and become, like, a foot taller, grow wings, and have his package grow a couple of inches through some sort of realization on his feelings for his friends? Also, maybe Spike and a bimbofied Ember can get in on some steaming hot sexy times with the mane 6, Sunburst, and Starlight; I'm also thinking some sexy griffon blood action for Spike from Gilda. Just a few ideas I've been throwing around in my head. Also, maybe on the different points in the journey, each of the Mane 6 could say how they want Spike to be more involved not only with their kids, but they want to also try actually being romantically involved.
8362013 Here are few things to start off. One, despite being stated quite clearly that Spike impregnated the Mane 6 (and possibly the CMC) there is no show of consequences, it’s pretty much just ignored in this story (as far as I can tell anyway); 2, in both this and the prior story we are never given a reason why the Elements made the girls into such bimbos (and rather slutty in some cases) while Celestia and Luna were clearly not affected this way despite being the prior bearers of the Elements, also why the Rainbow harmony wave didn’t seem to have much of an effect on them, you can’t handwave that away with what they are because Twilight was one as well; 3, Cadance was hardly part of the prior story despite much of it clearly falling into her domain, it was Celestia who was the main orchestrator of a lot of the sex based antics (in a rather indirect way) of Spike’s Bimbo Filled Life; 4, there are seemingly no ramifications for the events of the prior story happening, even within the story itself when such ramifications should be present and evident; 5, despite your claims in Spike’s Bimbo Filled Life that the girls managed maintain most of their intellectual capabilities they still manage to go straight on into full blown idiot territory when their established characters wouldn’t do so (case and point, Rarity making super slutty attire regardless of the client, it would make far more sense for her to make super revealing attire that borders on being slutty but still doesn’t cross the line). And that’s just what I can pull from the old archive after a quick skim through the established chapters of the stories.
Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work. Maybe we might see a bimbo Spike and the girls have to try and save him. Or the story ends with Spike impregnating them again.
the group of friends run into more of AJ's extended family and end up roling in the hey. raity finds a gorup of fans that enjoyed her more riskay outfits from her bimbo days. Spike meets some die hard find/worhipers that are exploring equestrai and the girsl get joules and competivie. We take a bit of time out to see how the cuite mark crusaders are doing. (im thinking their raiding their elder siblins private stashes toys and mags). last but not least Luna drema escapabes. can be by her self and of couse helping the gorup deal with their desires (or pushing them off the edge >;P ) infact maybe luna ask the CMC to help her get her young lover.
nice one man, I'm so hyped for whatever you're up to, I can't wait. I especially love how dirty you make Rainbow and Flutter in the previous one UNF
KO awesome chapter, well looks like Spike and the Mane 6 have a lustrous Adventure to go on and how they'll keep their sanity in check.
Hope to see more "sessions" more for Spike.
Looking at this story now, It's heard to believe the first story involved Spike and the bimbo 6 trying to flirt and seduce him and ends up getting them all pregnant. and now It has the Spike and the mane 6 trying to stop this evil person from turning equestria in bimbos again. That a little bit of Mood whiplash. especially since everything now is taking more seriously than what happen in the previous story.
Favorite student, huh?
Oh, uh, Sunset! I didn't know you were, uh, here! So..., how've you been?
...
Look, when I said Starlight was my favorite, I didn't really mean...
You didn't really mean what, exactly?
Starlight! You see, umm... Well, you see, Sunset... Uhh... *poof*
...
...
She's not coming back, is she?
Nope.
... Wanna make out?
... Yeah, sure.
Let's see if Cupio can handle this.
I enjoyed Spike's Bimbo Filled Life, but that story had some character problems that couldn't entirely be explained away by plot. There are some things that were just ignored in that story, go back and read it again and you'll know what I'm talking about, that ironically are now more evident thanks to this one. Because all that, both stories suffer.
8359972
Fuck man that's like an actual solid critique. I know you said that if I go back and read SBFL I would understand what character problems I ignored but it's difficult for me to come at my own story with an analytical eye like a reader would. If you give me some examples of what I ignored it might help me get a general idea of what I missed. Thanks.
I liked this chapter, but you're really leaving me wanting more, sir. Also, is it a bad thing that I want Spike to have another growth spurt and become, like, a foot taller, grow wings, and have his package grow a couple of inches through some sort of realization on his feelings for his friends? Also, maybe Spike and a bimbofied Ember can get in on some steaming hot sexy times with the mane 6, Sunburst, and Starlight; I'm also thinking some sexy griffon blood action for Spike from Gilda. Just a few ideas I've been throwing around in my head. Also, maybe on the different points in the journey, each of the Mane 6 could say how they want Spike to be more involved not only with their kids, but they want to also try actually being romantically involved.
8362013
Here are few things to start off. One, despite being stated quite clearly that Spike impregnated the Mane 6 (and possibly the CMC) there is no show of consequences, it’s pretty much just ignored in this story (as far as I can tell anyway); 2, in both this and the prior story we are never given a reason why the Elements made the girls into such bimbos (and rather slutty in some cases) while Celestia and Luna were clearly not affected this way despite being the prior bearers of the Elements, also why the Rainbow harmony wave didn’t seem to have much of an effect on them, you can’t handwave that away with what they are because Twilight was one as well; 3, Cadance was hardly part of the prior story despite much of it clearly falling into her domain, it was Celestia who was the main orchestrator of a lot of the sex based antics (in a rather indirect way) of Spike’s Bimbo Filled Life; 4, there are seemingly no ramifications for the events of the prior story happening, even within the story itself when such ramifications should be present and evident; 5, despite your claims in Spike’s Bimbo Filled Life that the girls managed maintain most of their intellectual capabilities they still manage to go straight on into full blown idiot territory when their established characters wouldn’t do so (case and point, Rarity making super slutty attire regardless of the client, it would make far more sense for her to make super revealing attire that borders on being slutty but still doesn’t cross the line). And that’s just what I can pull from the old archive after a quick skim through the established chapters of the stories.
still waiting for a broken condom part hehehe and also platform boots
Looking forward to seeing what happens next. Any word on the next chapters progress?
Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work. Maybe we might see a bimbo Spike and the girls have to try and save him. Or the story ends with Spike impregnating them again.
I would love to see some Bimbo Gilda as well, as well as to see what she will do to guys.
New chapter when
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I think that they are meeting Gilda, so yeah. Yay for bimbo Gilda and maybe Ember.
Let's see some type of magic/etc turn guys into girls?
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Nah man that's gay af