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Don't use "Don't like, don't read." Excuse, it won't help you improve as a writer, it also makes you look bad, it'll also make people give you a thumbs down when you use said-excuse.
lol nice story..... more?
Nicely done... though, to be frank. I don't like popping. Even if they don't die. Nice to see you writing again.
7909183 Yes. Better to write ''Constructive criticism welcomed'' or something along those lines.
He 'really' should stop writing stuff like ''Don't like? Don't read. Trolling coments will be deleted'' on his stories... It's kinda pointless, in all honesty, and is much more creating a target than anything.
7909286 Honestly, it seemed almost like it was more of a ''massive fart'' she had at climax, than ''popping'', really.
7909366 Even gassy, I don't like...
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I'm not using this account to improve. I have a different, non-clop account for that. That warning is simply there for other people's benefit. I don't care if they get downvoted to hell, which they will because they're fetish stories. I only write these stories for the people that like this kinda stuff. If they have suggestions on how I can improve them, I'm all ears.
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You will see more in the future.
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Sorry to hear that. This was something I more or less threw together to try and get back into writing this kind of stuff. Look for other types in the future.
7909552 Then perhaps you should of added a password and kept it unpublished, or better yet post it on Furaffinity
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There are many people here on fimfiction who enjoy my work. THOSE are the people I write this stuff for. If I move it to another site, those people might have a hard time finding it. I don't mind downvotes, I really don't. As long as the people who enjoy this kind of stuff can access it can get to it.
7909592 Alright then, whatever floats your boat.
H8rs gonna h8
Nice as always. But why add popping and only go halfway, so to speak? Not everyone likes it, sure, but then why not scrap it? Or go for the proper blast, tatters and all?
The only gripe I had with it.
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I don't actually like fatal popping or anything unfortunately. Also, it's more like a blast than a pop. It makes sense given that it's gas.
*snickers*
Now I'm getting a mental image of Derpy tooting her tush with that signature goofy grin of hers.