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this is so oddly exciting....I DEMAND MORE!
What the strange?
MOAR!!!
Mmm, First: Where's the Comedy tag? Really. You're gonna do this without a comedy tag?
Ha! When I read inflation why did I think this would dive head first into an economics lesson? Needless to say I was disappointed.
Oookay. That's enough internet for now. For some reason I will keep an eye on this.
Keep it up, this is creative from what I have seen.
man, i must be messed up in the head. but then i think, 'fuck that i'm me!' then i feel all better
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You're messed up in the head? I'M the one who WROTE this! how do you think i feel?!
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huh, good point. well, think like i do then! just think to yourself, 'no body knows what i look like on here,' and then write whatever you want.
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Yeah, that's pretty much what i do.
I'm still very much disturbed by the fact that this is somehow arousing to me. But hey, at least i can hopefully make a couple other people happy.
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well, take heart that you aren't alone my friend.
Both the sadisic side of me and the normal side agree, good story
Any chance of Zecora becoming involved at some point?
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Not likely. Any chapters added will likely be between aj and rares. The stories really are about them and their relationship progression after all.
Besides, i would expect zecora to be the type to stay on the sidelines rather than get swept up in the ridiculousness.
Update?
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Updates will come. Lately i've been sick wih some sort of chest thing and that tends to kill any interest in activities that these stories provoke.
Also im still wrestling with different ways they can share their interest and which way their relationship will develop.
Sheesh, I've heard of inflation fics, and pony fics, I wasn't expecting a pony inflation fic!
Actually, I'm not entirely surprised.
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Ponify EVERYTHING!
Also, what good is a cutie mark of it can't be stretched ridiculously wide?
Hawt.
What about something involving helium? Or one of them inflating the other entirely by lung power(puff kiss)? Even better a combination of the two
There's also inflation but not to such an extreme degree. Just enough to be helpless and useful for something like; a raft out on the lake, a bed to be slept upon, and so on.
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...helium and used to replace the hot air balloon meant to lift the basket seen in the MLP Intro. I'm guessing that belongs to Twilight as it's been used a few times throughout the seasons. Although I could see Pinkie being really silly and after a party, sucking all the helium balloons dry. Partly for the silly squeaky voice you get with helium, and partly because she'd get lighter and lighter with each one until she starts to float making it an increasing challenge just to reach the remaining balloons.
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I've done helium before but in a much weirder way. I can probably do it more traditionally in this setting though. I like the puff kiss idea. The problem is, it would be hard to get a pony very big using that. that being said....
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The puff kiss idea could work for your idea though. Smaller inflations have never been my thing though.
If I were to do a smaller inflation fic, what would the focus be? I need to know because for me it's always the building pressure of the larger inflations that become the focus.
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If filling the room has been your goal, why has the action always seemed to get rather sparse at that point? While I'm not going to say I'm an expert on writing, far from it, wouldn't you want to get more descriptive towards the 'end', slowing the narrative down for more exposition? In other words; from the way the stories read, it's as if you care more about the initial foreplay than the results of a pony held nearly immobile by the four walls of the room. This would appear to go against what you want here;
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The initial foreplay is how the scene is set. Making the subjects comfortable and show how they end up down such a path. If you go through my stories, the parts where the description falls short is right in the middle. The beginning and the end are where I put most of my detail, explicitly pointing out just how things are.
It's also a bit of runaway. I don't know how to put it really. A panic sort of situation. Everything starts happening all at once and the danger level spikes.
I don't know. Maybe I'm just not very good at writing this sort of stuff since I don't have the sort of time to devote to writing it fully. Might be time to just hang it up.
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I'd think making a second pass through the scene might help? When you say runaway, did you mean this was initially a one-shot that took on a life of it's own?
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No, I mean runaway as in the situation. In this one it's about Fluttershy filling the room. The desperate struggle to get rarity off so she can stop inflating before she pops. A sense of urgency.
I really love chapter 4!!
Could try a situation where the inflation is completely accidental, but is quickly taken advantage of. Maybe one of the other girls finds themselves in a puffy situation and after it's made sure she won't pop, some fun ensues.
Also wouldn't mind seeing Rarity get back at Zecora for helping AJ give her a bad case of gas.
This made my stomach hurt. The thought of being inflated just makes me sorta sick, ya know?
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If that's the case, I now ask you why... Oh WHY... did you click on, read, and then comment on a story with inflation in the actual title?
I'm half-serious with this question. On one half I want to shake my head at the fallacy. On the other, I can't help but wonder if maybe this is a way of facing your.uncomfortableness.
For example, I have an abnormal fear of being inside another creature or human. Movies like innerspace or the fantastic voyage where people get shrunk down and put inside another person are insanely discomforting to me.
However, I still watch these movies for some dumb reason, maybe to confront my fear. Regardless, now I want to know, why did you read a story that you knew, or at least had an inkling would cause a negative reaction?
Random idea: maybe a potion that increases orgasm and then they plug themselves up? Maybe the glass, erm, "implement" from Chapter 3 could make a comeback as well. That'd be hawt.
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Im so confuse. Glass implement? The only glass items in chapter 3 were wine glasses and the antidote. Also, how is a potion that increases orgasms supposed to pump them up? Need a little clarification.
4371740 Whoops, I thought the two-ended dildo was glass for some reason. Silly me.
And think of it this way: if the liquid from the orgasm can't get out, where will it go? Hopefully that clears things up.
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I'll think about it and see what comes up. Technically, If they're plugged up, there's no new fluids being introduced so I'll have to contrive something to make them larger.
You should have a chapter with all of the mane six, since I think only Fluttershy knows about their relationship, as far as I know. But good story, though.
But what about Twily?! Twily will live, right?
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what does twilight have to do with this story?
well my theories have been confirmed after i watched that episode i instantly thought to my self eyup that's gowning to be a fic read it and LOVE IT!!!
Are you working on a new chapter?
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still gots da writer's block. As soon as something strikes me and I can step away from my non clopfics, I'll put on a new.chapter.
Could you maybe do one where......
Where they have a few barrels of cider? Maybe a drinking contest between Aj and Dash?
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I'll think on it. Do you have any objections to me playing up the carbonation angle?
Pump Flutter's vag with something heavily carbonated and shake the 'bottle'.
Nicely done, cally! I wonder how big Rainbow and Applejack would get if they are going to have their... "Competition".
Definately can't wait for more!
Who needs realism?! Keep those horny ponies growing!!!
4810232 ehat episode was it?
What's next cum inflation?
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He's referring to... uhh... I don't remember the name because I'm terribly not fond of spike episodes.... but in one of the episodes, he believes he owes a life debt to Applejack, and one of his ways of proving his usefulness is to show that she may need help breathing.
So he jams a set of bellows in her mouth and breifly pump her up. It's very fast, but it did start a spark... one I couldn't help but follow... and became the impetus lf this story. Then I kinda just kept adding onto it over time.
Thanks Cally. Hope life has brightened up some for you.
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Thanks. It really has. Especially thanks to people like you. Nice to know someone cares.
Oh yes, bring in the Dash!