Really good. Now if only Rarity can see her like this

8038098 That would be pretty great But I have other ideas for this story.

I'm loving this so far. When can we expect to see part 2?

8038219 hopefully soon. I'm about 3.2k words deep in the next chapter, which is shaping up to be even longer than this one.

This was really cute! While I would prefer Coco in this situation, I still enjoyed this!

8038339 She would be cute in diapers, wouldn't she? For me though, I just like a little karmactic retribution every now and again.

8038358 Yes, she would, and I understand where you're coming from. Suri deserves this after what she did to Rarity.

As expected, this is adorable and also well written. I love Suri's detailed thought process and reaction to every embarrassing act. But let me guess, Photo Finish is going to want some used diaper photos isn't she?

8038489 Will she or won't she? I can'd divulge that information just yet. Sorry, but you'll need to wait for chapter two.

Haha, karma! Ain't it a b**tch, huh Suri?

8038489 Oh yes, considering Photo Finish really wants the most out of her model, I'm sure she's gonna want a couple of wet and messy shots for the clients who really want them.

8038570 That it is.

Ah ha ha ha!

I'm liking this quite a bit!

But Coco Pommel as an adult foal photoshoot assistant is a new one. She's usually the adult foal.

On a side note,

Provided the were foal clothes.

Since Suri is the one talking do you mean "they weren't foal clothes"?

8039318 Nice catch. Thanks for that one.

And I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. Hopefully the laughs keep coming.

I'm betting that Photo Finish will either:
A. Force Suri to wet/mess her diaper.
B. Suri will wet/mess herself and we'll have a scene of Coco changing her (I'm hoping for this).
C. A combination of both.

8040819 I'm afraid I can't confirm or deny if you're on the right track, but I will say that you'll learn soon enough what happens. Maybe not today, seeing as I'm now around 6k into chapter two and still have a lot to write, but for sure sometime this week you'll get your answer.

8040891 I look forward to seeing how this story unfolds over the next couple of days.

i think coco deserves some revenge for how suri treated her

8040898 Which is why I'm hoping there's a moment of Suri messing herself and having Coco change her diaper.

Perhabs Photo Finish would find a picture of Suri in the act of using her diaper perfect.

It this only a two part story? Would that explain why Chapter 2 is so long?

8041236 I'm hoping to wrap up the story with two chapters. Should it end up getting too long I'll bring in a third to round it out.

8040946 Plenty of people are hoping for that so far. Certainly would go a long way in humiliating Suri, wouldn't it?

8040898 That's precisely why she gets a front row seat to the world's most demeaning photoshoot. Rarity'll be so jealous.

So, Chapter 2 is apparently over 6,000 words long? Hopefully, that means it will be juicy when it comes out later today.

8041387 That's the idea

8041401 I guess we'll find out what happens next in a couple of minutes.

8041402 'Fraid it's not coming in the next few minutes. I've been knocking out paragraphs for most of the day, but the chapter still isn't close to completion. We're standing at about 7.5k words roughly if you want to know, and it'll probably go for much more. Sorry, but it's looking like Wednesday at the earliest.

8041431That's fine. If anything, it must be really good if it's this long and elaborate.

Are you any closer to being finished?

8043460 Thankfully yes. Expect chapter two in a few hours at most.

8043505 Great. I look forward to seeing just how bad things get for poor suri. And maybe we'll find out why this story earned a Mature tag.

8043527 could be materbafiom but that would getcit a seed tag. So probably heavy messing or something

I like the writing style

Miss P-- uh, Suri

I actually think Coco would call her Miss Polimare. To have a facade of professionalism.

You're doing Coco quite well. You kept her kind and shy nature but you didn't make her all sweet and forgiving and did add a vengeful part to her.