Bonus Chapter: Realization
It was too hard to refuse the request, especially after I'd come up with an idea myself.
This ship... it drives me to write!
Or... sails me to write, I suppose. 
(why does part of me feel like no one will enjoy this chapter 
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(Edit: I've never been happier to be wrong!)
Fluttershy giggled as a swarm of squirrels leapt in and out of her hair, inadvertently tickling her to the point where she was fairly certain it was on purpose.
She tried to suppress her remaining giggles in order to speak. "Easy, please!"
It'd been about a week since the Grand Galloping Gala. It was long behind her now and she held no qualms about it; after all, she'd done things too.
Though, she couldn't fully understand why Discord was so forgiving; he'd just shrugged off everything like it wasn't even a problem. Mind you, she realized it was a bit mean to say that she didn't expect him to be forgiving, but after the whole jealousy thing with Tree Hugger, she'd figured that he was like that with at least a few things.
But that was just how Discord was, right? He was unpredictable, and she could never be sure what'd he do next. Maybe it was simply that he got jealous easily, yet forgave easily too.
Or... maybe it was her?
Her heart skipped a beat at the thought, though she abandoned it just as quickly. No, that was ridiculous. He cared about her, she was certain, but to forgive so quickly without a thought was unthinkable for someone like him. It was something she did all the time, but Element of Kindness and all that.
That wasn't the biggest mystery though; no, that award went to his whole 'Flutteromantic' thing. What did that even mean? She racked her brain on it for a good long while, but still had no ideas.
She wasn't entirely sure why she was so hung up on it either. Her failures only made her feel like an idiot.
"Fluttershy."
She snapped out of her thoughts and jumped back as she realized that Discord had suddenly appeared, face inches away from her. Her muzzle changed to pink, as she found his eyes rather pretty up close.
He stood up to his full height, gesturing outwards. "If you're going to take your mind on a trip to another dimension, you could've at least invited your old pal Discord!"
The tenseness she didn't realize she had eased as she giggled. "I'm sorry, Discord. I was thinking."
"Aren't you always?" he teased, suddenly laying on his stomach in one of the trees. "I'd think you wouldn't still be alive if you didn't. No, that instead looks like the face you put on when you're deeply thinking about something, my dear!"
More memories of last week briefly flashed in her mind.
He teleported back in front of her, his eyes practically dripping with curiosity. "So~?"
She bit her bottom lip sheepishly. As cute as he'd surely react, it'd be far too embarrassing if she said she was thinking deeply about him.
"I-I was, um, thinking about something that happened last week?" It wasn't a complete lie.
He didn't respond, his eyebrows lowering slightly as he stared at her. Did he know...?
A squeak from one of her squirrels then got her attention. "O-oh! Um..."
She tried to look at them as they all scurried up to the top of her head. "Discord, these are my new squirrel friends. They moved in just the other day."
She gestured as she listed them off. "This is Maple, Aspen, Sequoia, and Pine."
The squirrels all waved to Discord, who looked sufficiently amused. "Do you think any of them would give me a starter?"
Fluttershy blinked a few times. "Hm?"
"Nevermind," he said with a deep chuckle. "But anyway, Fluttershy, you never told me you doubled as a condo!"
He vanished, Fluttershy looking around for a moment before she felt something squirming around in her mane.
Discord popped out, roughly around the squirrels' size, seeming to relax in her strands of pink hair. "All right, I'll admit it; this is spectacular." He glanced up at the squirrels, who now seemed jealous that someone else was taking up their space. "What's the rent like?"
Fluttershy giggled, trying to fix a few loose strands of her hair with her hoof. "I don't mean to let them do it; I'm not really a condo. B—" She paused before she could say anything else, blushing slightly. She mulled it over for a moment, then took a breath, turning her gaze away from him. "B-besides, you can be there anytime you want."
If Discord wasn't already grinning wide, he was now. She was too cute when she was flustered.
Fluttershy quickly diverted the conversation. "I've been trying to get them to stop, but I think they love the smell too much."
Discord sunk a bit lower in her hair, only to feel something underneath him. He looked down, then pulled out the acorn that had been planted in her mane. "And using you as their own personal storage, by the looks of it."
She pouted, blush deepening. "I've been trying to get them to stop that too."
"We'll have to get rid of them," he said, swimming through her hair as he began to shove all of the various acorns out. "I can't have your furry friends making renovations in my condo!"
He went to the top of her head, leaning over so she could see his small head staring at her. "Besides, 'Flutternutter' doesn't suit you in the slightest."
"Flutternutter?" she repeated with a questioning tone.
Discord opened his mouth to respond, only to get pelted by an acorn. He jerked his head back up, rubbing where he'd been hit, then noticed that Fluttershy's squirrels were now up in a tree, acorns filling their little arms.
"Oh, behave!" Fluttershy pleaded to her jealous squirrels.
"It's fine, my dear," Discord assured, patting her head. "I see now that I'll have to fight for my right!"
He levitated one of the acorns to himself, then tore off the top, using it as a shield while turning the rest into a sword that didn't look unlike a crazy straw.
"Have at you!"
Fluttershy observed from a distance as Discord flew up to fight the squirrels. She allowed herself a small giggle, then sat down and ran her forelegs through her mane to help straighten it out.
"I'm going back inside to make tea. Feel free to come in when you're ready!" she called.
He didn't respond, but she was sure he heard her.
She smiled fondly at him.
Fluttershy tipped the teapot carefully as it emptied its contents into the cups on the table. After being Discord's friend for so long, she'd gotten used to his frequently random visits. They planned times together, certainly, as there were moments where Fluttershy was sure that she'd have nothing to do if he wasn't there, but most of the time, he just came over whenever he felt like.
She cherished it. The surprise visits were honestly the highlights of her week.
As she thought about it, almost out of nowhere - much like Discord's visits themselves - his voice echoed in her head. "Besides, 'Flutternutter' doesn't suit you in the slightest."
She mulled it over with herself. Thinking about it, why had that made her pause so suddenly? It was like something had clicked with her and she hadn't realized it.
She just barely got her attention back before she overflowed the last cup, hooves shaking with a bit of urgency as she put the lid back on the teapot. "O-oh goodness..."
"Ooo, are we doing nicknames now?"
She turned, seeing Discord standing next to her and overlooking the cups of tea with a playful smile on his face.
"I prefer 'great chaoticness' myself, but 'goodness' is acceptable too!" He stroked his beard in thought. "It just needs something else. 'Royal goodness', perhaps." His ears perked. "Maybe even 'supreme goodness'!" He hummed for a moment to think about it, only for his ears to fall back down. "No, that makes me sound like a pizza, and I'm much more delectable than that."
Fluttershy moved her mane out of her face, smiling. "D-did everyone go all right with the squirrels?"
He looked at her as if he'd forgotten. "...Oh! No, not exactly."
He flew over the table, grabbing one of the tea cups with his tail on the way, then sat down on the couch. "Apparently, you can't own somepony's mane when it's already attached to their little heads. Honestly, how do you ponies live in these conditions?" He brought the teacup to his mouth, taking a sip before letting it drop into his hands.
Fluttershy laughed airily. She had no idea how to continue such a conversation, but she tried. "We manage."
"Just barely, I imagine!"
He started rambling, but she didn't mind, sipping her tea slowly to savor the moment. He tended to talk on and on about quite a few things, but it was pleasant. She'd always been more of a listener than a talker, making Discord perfect to converse with, as he seemed delighted every time she nodded her head to show she'd been listening.
As she pulled her cup away from her mouth, she looked down, zoning out as she saw her reflection in her drink. Her mind moved itself back to the previous moment she'd shared with Discord once more. Something had already clicked, she was sure; she just needed herself to do the same.
Flutter...
Discord was still rambling at the time, unaware that Fluttershy had entirely checked out. "All I'm saying is, if I had it my way, you'd be able to—"
The sound of something shattering on the floor cut him off. He looked over, seeing that Fluttershy's cup had fallen out of her hooves and was in pieces, all over the floor in front of her, yet she wasn't even looking at it or freaking out.
He raised a brow. Her face was red - completely red - as if someone had splashed her with a bucket of paint.
He put his cup down on the couch, then flew over, hovering in front of her face. He waved, but received no response.
At the flick of his hand, the mess was clean. "Fluttershy?"
She remained still, hooves over her mouth. Her gaze was in his general direction, but not at him; it was more like she was looking right through him, as if he wasn't there.
Feeling concerned, he brought his hand to her face, snapping his fingers; not to summon magic, but just as an attempt to get her attention.
She jumped out of her trance, blinking a few times before recognizing that Discord was in front of her.
"There you went again!" he shouted, though there was a tinge of relief in his voice that Fluttershy just barely caught. "Off on vacations to distant dimensions!"
He flew off, standing a few feet away, back facing her as he crossed his arms. "If you're going to keep leaving me out like this, we're going to have to seriously reconsider our relationship!"
"O-our relationship?" she quietly asked, throat going dry. She swallowed shyly, the blush never leaving her face.
She'd figured it out.
Her eyes darted around the room for a second as she mindlessly tapped her hooves together. Her heart felt like it would burst out of her chest at any moment, a resolve now built up inside her.
"...Discord!" she exclaimed anxiously, slamming her hooves down on the chair.
He peeked over at her, surprise across his features. He'd never heard her shout quite like that.
She took in a deep breath, then let it out, looking down to the floor. Her voice dropped back to being quiet. "...M-my orientation."
His ear flickered. "Your...?"
"My orientation!" she repeated loudly, as if her voice was going through mood swings. "Y-you asked about my orientation last week!"
This was officially the strangest conversation Discord ever had that he hadn't started himself. "Yes, I did?" He chuckled, confused. "I thought we both knew that already?"
"Y-yes! A-and," she took another breath, pupils shrunken in, "and I-I couldn't give you an answer then, b-but I can now!"
Her wings were flared out, her face turning to an even deeper shade of red if that was possible.
Discord wasn't sure how to take her suddenness, but he was certainly interested. Suddenness was fun. "Oh?"
"I..." She hesitated, but mentally scolded herself for it; she'd never get it out if she stuttered and paused. "I-I know I said that I found stallions and mares attractive b-before, a-and that's technically true, but, um," she was talking rapidly, trying to get everything out as quickly as possible, "I-I've found other creatures attractive before too, so it doesn't mean I'm limited to just ponies. I-it could be anyone, like you—I MEAN..."
She covered her face, realizing she was about as smooth as sandpaper.
Without thinking, she let it slip. "I-I'm Disromantic!"
A pause followed, after which she flailed her hooves about. "W-wait, no, that's not right! M-maybe Discoromantic? Discordromantic?!"
She wanted so badly to crawl into a hole and die. Discord had basically already confessed, so why was it so hard to return it? She figured she owed him that much after the realization that she made him wait a week for a response.
She flopped over, burying her face in her pillow to hide the burning hot blush on her face. Perhaps it'd been difficult for the sheer fact that she hadn't fully discovered her own feelings until she realized his?
Not that it mattered much; she flubbed up her confession regardless. Her embarrassment only deepened as she wondered if maybe some of her animals had been watching.
Discord meanwhile, had been standing there, taking her speedily blunt words with a bit of surprise, though it didn't take long for it to form into a smug smirk.
"You certainly took your sweet time, Fluttershy! I've been idling here waiting for you to figure me out! 'Flutteromantic', really, how hard was that?"
He flew over and bundled up his little pegasus ball in his arms. Fluttershy peeked up at him, staring with wide eyes.
"Y-you... meant for me to get it?"
"Yes!"
He faltered.
"...Well, no, not exactly, but since you're so into me, I can hardly mind." His grin was even wider now as he lightly tapped her nose. Her snout scrunched up as she gave him a flustered pout. He was so lovably insufferable sometimes.
"Besides, you gave me quite the show just now, hm?"
The amusement in his tone brought back Fluttershy's want to crawl into a hole.
"Don't be shy now, my dear! I'd be more than happy for you to bask in my presence!"
She hid her face anyway. This was a mistake; a terrible, wonderful mistake.
He leaned down, daring to touch his lips to her cheek, if only to see the reaction she'd have. She squeaked, heart soaring as she looked back up at him.
If she was honest, she'd never seen him happier. It was all too much.
"...D-Discord, I need to go back outside and check on the squirrels," she excused, needing a moment away from the obviously flirty draconequus.
"I didn't know you were so unprofessional! Leaving before we've even finished our tea..." He 'tsk'd' her. "The least you could do is give your ravishingly handsome guest a good-bye kiss!"
That was it. There was no more need for a hole to die in anymore; she was already dead and gone.
He gripped her a bit tighter, brow raised with a smug smile on his face; his cute, dumb, smug face, she noted. He wasn't going to let her go until she gave him what he'd suggested.
She let out a shy whine, shaky hooves reaching up to grab his face. His brow raised higher, as if confused, and she gently touched her muzzle to his, their lips making contact for only a moment.
His arm's grip loosened, and she wasted no time in squirming out and back onto the floor. She trotted as casually as she could to the door, giving him only a glance before running out.
Behind her mane, she smiled softly.
Discord, now alone in the room, actually had a light red blush along his face. His lips shifted for a moment before he brought his hand to them, a warm sensation lingering from Fluttershy's kiss. He blinked a few times, processing it, then chuckled to himself.
"I never said it had to be on the lips, now did I?"
He wasn't complaining.
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Eeeeeee. I love Fluttercord.
Very sweet AND well characterized! I've gotten critical comments for portraying Discord and Fluttershy as a couple in several of my stories, even though it these cases it was not the central (or even a peripheral) theme of the story. It just seemed obvious to me that the two of them weren't likely to challenge the other with expectations beyond their innate capabilities, and their strengths perfectly make up for the the other's blind spots.
In general I don't fancy shipping stories. But this was indeed very well done!
I like chapter 2, I think it added something that the story needed. It wasn't so much her confession as the extra time they spent together.
BABIES!!!!!!!!
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Thank you! ;////; That fact that people like it when I didn't expect them to helps a lot.
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Aaahhhhh, thanks a bunch!
I'm so glad people like it!
I suppose that's my style in a way; I don't always go for a strict confession or I flitter about for a while first. I'm glad people like that too.
Okay, this needs to be said and I'll say it now. Every author improves in some way or another, especially when it comes to Discord and his characterization.
I love More than Trust and Less than Chaotic. I've read them countless times and I will no doubt do so again. However...
I think you write him even better than you used to. The fact that An Apple a Day... is still pretty high up on the featured chart for the third or fourth consecutive day in a row is evidence of that, but furthermore, this Discord is a lot quirkier and trickier, in my opinion, than he was in your earlier works.
This is not to say that he wasn't like that at all in the aforementioned stories. As I've said before, I still love More than Trust and the sequel.
But HOT DANG, GIRL. I can't get enough of your writing, and you're making me love it more and more the more you write, and I'm having trouble deciding what's gonna end up being my most favorite story of yours. You keep improving when it was already pretty awesome, and I just love seeing all this from you. I'm so glad you're writing again.
I loved all of Discord's little jokes and tricks, like the whole 'condo' joke and living on Fluttershy's head, and his fight with the squirrels.
The nickname thing was hilarious too, as was his whole 'apparently, you can't own a mane that's on somepony's head already!' and then going on a rant about it without even realizing that Fluttershy is occupied in her own mind.
Also laughed at the whole 'visiting another dimension' joke every time she got into her own thoughts. Nice little reference there with Discord and his magical abilities! Very clever.
But the best part of all was how you got Fluttershy to realize what 'flutterientation' meant, and how she tried telling him. Not only was it incredibly adorable, but you used a nickname to get her to figure it out on her own without any real substantial help from anyone. 'Flutternutter'. And because lots of people give Fluttershy nicknames like that --Flutter-nutter, Shutterfly, Flutter-butter, Flutterbuddy -- I personally didn't see the realization coming when he brought that up. So it was a surprise that THAT was the trigger, and I found it really clever of you!
And of course, the kiss was adorable, and how Discord baited her into doing it (but she totally wanted to, obviously, so perhaps 'baited' has too much a negative connotation to it...). Oh, Discord, you tease! I love him. He's so in character, and so is Fluttershy, and you just...you keep this up, and I think fluttercord fans will start raving about your work on other websites, other places, errywhere! think you should be famous in the fluttercord fan network!
Yes yes yes ALL OF MY YES!!!!!!!
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THAT'S IT.
YOU DID IT.
I'M SHAKING AND CRYING HAPPILY IN REAL LIFE RIGHT NOW.
I HOPE YOU'RE HAPPY BECAUSE I'M JUST... OH MY GOSH. YOUR FRIENDSHIP IS TRULY MAGIC.
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IF IT'S JOYFUL TEARS THEN I'LL TAKE IT!!!!!!!!!!
And it takes two to tango, friendo! There's magic in both parties involved!!!
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AHHHH D////:
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Oh, I didn't realize you'd written the Disco/Flutterbat one, too. I still gotta go read that. I'm jealous that you got to the idea before it dawned on me!
So my one other piece of potential critique here is that I felt like both chapters had a few moments of Alien Shipping Syndrome. Now I don't mention that to dump on you in any way. But there are some moments where they (and especially Fluttershy) suddenly realize they'd been (physically) feeling some physical manifestation of their nerves and/or excitement about the other person, and it comes as a surprise to them when they "suddenly" realize they'd been feeling it all along. IMO it makes sense for emotional feelings to take time to understand, but the physical feelings would make more sense being immediate.
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I suppose I shouldn't really be surprised. I'm not good at conveying... well, anything, really.
I appreciate the critique! Sorry if you were disappointed...
7907063 Oh no. No no no. No disappointment here, and I think you did a fine job of conveying the characters' thoughts and feelings. I just wanted to provide some feedback about a technical aspect of the delivery. The hope is that it'll just help make the next one even better.
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I'm sorry. I guess it really was just a matter of my emotions toward the episode this fic follows overtaking things and screwing it up, which consequently led to that seeping into the chapter afterwards.
Though that might be giving my writing skill too much credit by blaming it on emotions instead. You'll probably feel similarly if/when you read An Apple a Night.
Well, I was going to say "And then they kissed", but...
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Yeah, I ship it.
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Just missed that train, I suppose.
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I-it's not like I like her or anything, b-baka!
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Wait, Tater's a girl?!
Well, that was unexpected, I'll admit...
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The greatest plot twist.
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Indeed! I'm still trying to wrsp my mind around it...
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Too sweet and adorable!
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Is there really such a thing?
AHHHH POKÉMON REFERENCE AHHHHH
Yes! You have just pleased me greatly! Pokémon Pearl was my first videogame, and although the last six main series games have disappointed me to various degrees (XY are downright horrible, ORAS has a couple of issues though some remain from XY, and SM's better but barely fix any of the issues I had with XYORAS in addition to adding a couple more flaws), I still ADORE the series.
I just want another Ranger game...or another Mystery Dungeon that rivals Explorers of Sky in terms of 'fantasticalness' (story, features available, same mechanics, Wonder Mail that actually can be generated using an online tool, etc.). Or another Shadow Pokémon game, since only the 'Orre branch' of Cipher was eliminated (it was mentioned that Cipher had bases in other regions, yet...nothing has been mentioned since 2005). Or a way to play Pokémon on the big screen - perhaps the Switch could have a couple of games? Anyway...
AHHHHH POKÉMON REFERENCE AHHHHH
Excellent story. You really need to change your user name to Gifted Pony.
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Aaaa, thank you!
Haha flutternutter :)
Great story and good points about characterization
This is just so painfully sweet. I cannot put into words how much I like this; it's really well done
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Aww, thank you so much! Lots of sweet is my speciality, so I'm glad you feel that way!
Perfect, flippaloozy-wahwah perfect.
cuteness overload!!!!