• Published 21st Jan 2017
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Evening Picnic - sparks117



Thunderlane and Soarin have a picnic planed right after work, and the lovers plan to use all the time they can get.

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Comments ( 6 )

Hmmm good story~
Also i am for both...

Maybe Sounding, Maybe All the way through, depending on what you guys say

Why not both?

7887395 cause some people don't like one or the other :P also I'm not to sure about my ability to do 'all the way through' yet, this story is very ambitious for my second fic ever, so. But, dosnt mean I won't try! Now... where's that motivation.. :trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright:

Holy shit typos... did you get a anyone to pre-read this for feedback and editing?

7890777 No I did not, This is my second fic ever and I did use G-docs that has a very nice grammar and spell check, so please explain some typos and be the one to give feedback instead of giving simple "Holy shit his is the worst" and just assume it will somehow help me? :ajsmug:

Unless of coarse you don't want to and are just saying things cause there is no repercussion for it?

Where's chapter two?

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