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10 years of this and I am going straight to Hell
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...before she crumpled to the ground, dead, her head bent at an unnatural angle, due to her snapped neck. Everypony looked on in horror; then the screaming started.
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Damn it all that would end the story right quick wouldn't it?
I am...intrigued. This is def going into my tracking folder! Looking foreword to future chapters and updates. Earned a like so far...maybe even a favorite.
8620437
Looking forward to it as well! Got some twists, some heart string pulling moments, and of course moments of unbridled (see what I did there?) passion.
I would've expect Mayes to be a little more spiteful to Rarity since she used to not want anything to do with him, but oh well. Either way nice story so far.
8620599
Oh trust me, wait for it ;)
So Mayes, still has a flame for Rarity or is he trying to move on and let the poor mare lived?
Because if he really moved on, I say he is suffering trying to kill that old flame.
Hmm. Interest piqued.
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Oh, you'll see my friend this I promise you.
8621344
My dick piqued
8621761
Je perfect, can't wait to see when a challenger approach and Rarity feels jealous for the first time
I quite like that there's already a history between the human and other character(s).
Can't wait to see where it goes from here !
A couple of questions:
Wait, so minks aren't sapient in Equestria? Is Fluttershy OK with this?
Second, I wonder about all the cursing in the lyrics. Is there any censorship? I guess they don't mind....?
I like where this is going. Keep up the good work.
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Totally understandable. I kind of try to take a more adult take on the otherwise cannon universe in regards to swearing as the words buck and such don't fit my personal writing sttle and actually didn't consider the implications of not editing "minks" I would personally say its synthetic mink kind of like "pleather"
Like the cover.
You got me hooked, but I'm gonna need more!
Not often I find a gem like this one.
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Next update should be later tonight.
Ooh la la, I'm loving it already! Though I'm kind of waiting for the sweet sweet catharsis of rarity getting lectured for being shallow as hell, if that'll ever go in that direction.
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Ditto!
8622657
Yesssssssssss
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You'll see :)
Lol this train is actually a rollercoaster. Can't wait for more.
Well this is gonna a be fun, Hope y'all had a merry Christmas
Love lunar
Wish I could give more than one upvote
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Shhhh make alternate accounts. Actually don't
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You have NO idea mate.
Wow speaking of a perfect poetic moment, like the metaphor goes, 'you only wish what you can't obtain' I'm seeing the start of a love pentagon?
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Awe geeze, I wouldn't know anything about that
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I can't wait to see how Pinkie takes this when she hears the news
So far I'm loving this story... Keep it up
What a twist! I just wonder if Fleur really is scheming something or Maya will bring the best of her making her feelings genuily, everything can happen.
Also for a brief second I imagine the beginning of a herd…je well that could be an interest development, and hey maybe Rarity and Colorado could start something of their own, it could be a curios surprise, join by love of a alien, stay by the friendship of camaraderie
REGRET!
Wow! This just keeps getting better.
That last sentence smacks of foreshadowing.
And it makes me happy.
This story is greatly unappreciated. Most definitely better than anything I've ever wrote. Keep up the good work!
So Mayes just assumed she wouldn't get with a human. Tis Tis Mayes.
Gotta say I'm not fond of the direction this chapter went.
Only found this story today, but I really liked how it made it plain that Mayes had moved on from Rarity (or at least had been trying to) and wasn't going to take her bullshit again after she shot him down.
But then to nearly turn right around and have her save him from the "evil seductress" and have him totally fall in love with her because of that just seems... cheap and not really make much sense. He'd probably just end up even MORE bitter because of it and just say "fuck it" and go full hobo again.
I know it (probably) hasn't been written yet, but it just makes me worry.
And besides, why CAN'T we have a good french-pone? There are barely any stories of her with a human at all, let alone good ones like this!
Is this on hiatus?
Need moreof this
So many answers to these problems with a good herd.
This author is a master of suspense.
Goodnight everybody
I intend to see this through to the end.
Woooo!!! I've been waiting for this to update.
update
Buck I caught up.
Hell yes!! So glad to see this updy! I beg of you PLEASE don't let this next update go on as long! Thank you for a amazing story.
I'd almost assumed I wouldn't see another update for this, happy to see another chapter! Huzzah!
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I really cant blame him that much. I have noticed multiple pieces of evidence that even if he was a stallion she would have said no. Him not being human was probably a convenient and somewhat true way to make her denial not hurt as much as it could.
I think these two mares are scheming on a gangbang.
And FAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
is AAAALLLLIIIIINN with the mothafuckin' HOOOOOOOOOOREEEEE
A-
*Smack*
Okay we sane now.
Anyway, this story kinda went wayward for me. I like the theme of pain and hurt and while I don't particularly fancy the Prench Whorse arc, I found it to be a bit to short to be considered a proper bout of 'conflict'. It seemed short, kinda rushed. Though the story in itself flows, this route is a bit lackluster.
I saw little to no buildup, leading to low payoff, and primarily lack of conflict to drive the reader to continue.
Make no mistake the flow for this story is smooth and in a sense makes up for the lack of structure but at the same time it doesn't.
It was a nice read though, so I'll but this with my 4star fanfic shelf.
Aribaderchi