Twilight is writing a fan fiction about Rarijack. But because of this, Rarity and Apple Jack fall in love.
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Oh Dashie give Pinkie a chance you might like her more than you think lol.
7866109 that's what I said. RainbowPie for life!
This left me confused as to what actually happened. Did Twilight put a spell on them? Or did she just read her fanfic and they fell in love?
Also, I think you need to expand a lot more on your story, because this is less a story and more of a plot summary. Don't be afraid to go into details and make the reader care about what's happening.