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Oh the comments~

I'm surprised at how well these two fics fit

7861342 Yeah they definitely fit together well - it felt pretty natural to cross them over like this.

So this is a sort-of sequel to Gilda the Girlfriend?

7861479 Yeah, it's canon.

(BTW, I don't necessarily consider the human from Gilda the Girlfriend to be "Anon" in the 4chan sense, but since the story's not in second person I had to call him something.)

OK i forgot to look at tags i saw dash AND Gilda on the title went in started reading...........

:pinkiesick:

edit:oh yeah i lost my privledge to complain buuuut i always hated futa on male but again did not look

It felt like everything was progressing a bit too fast, which is fine since it was for sex's sake and you only had 3k words to work with (as in the commissioner paid for 3k words). The pacing unfortunately extended to the sex area as well since the characters needed to go for two rounds. It wasn't bad, but I'm left just seeing an abridged version of these characters' relationships. Upvoted but I don't think I'm gonna fav' this one.

7863279 That's reasonable. It was a lot to fit into 3k (which is why it almost hit 4k!)

Talons curled around Anon's shoulder, squeezing like a vice. Just enough force to hurt... and not an ounce more. Just like always.

My favorite line in the story. Really illustrates their progression of trust .

7865804 Thanks! I really like writing about this relationship - there's something really attractive to me about a woman who has overwhelming strength, but who chooses to be gentle and caring to the people she loves.

7869054

A million times, this.

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I feel the love is a lot more poignant when a big, buff Amazon babe who can totally dominate her partner, but she chooses to be a total sweetheart and waifu to her smaller partner.

I love that shit, mang

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