Why did you make the chapters so long?

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Shhh

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It's sort of my own nitpick. I've read a lot of stories that were short, but semisweet chapters that I feel that it could've had a little more in there, give them that slice of life feel that nothing really ends like a chapter of a book.

Most of the reason why I write such long chapters is due to the inspiration I get as well as being inspired by a few other long-chaptered stories. Another small reason is that long stories (when pulled off right) can feel like an enjoyable journey.

so didn't they just make humans extinct by changing his form.

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Find me a human that has legions of other humans in their heads, or is willing to undergo mineralization for the passage of eons. I'd be very interested in engaging in a discussion with such a human. Or one who can manifest indestructible materia from out of nowhere.

The human may appear human in form, but he has qualities which deviate from humans.

Also, to makes something extinct, you would need enough quantities of something for it to be eradicated, eliminated, or destroyed. It requires an entire specie to no longer exist or live in the world, to be considered extinction, not just one of a kind lifeform being wiped out.

Also, apparently this world's human mythology portrays humans in enough terrible light so as to incite fear and terror in the cultures which have human mythology. Enough fear as to elicit a fight response in these cultures, and that their military prowess is enough that the Equestrian government does not wish to encounter a scenario of these human-phobes finding out that the Equestrian nation was harboring the horrible and horrendous human of their mythology. Had the human remained in his human form, he likely would have had assassins, mercenaries, and armed forces attempting to kill him until they were successful in the slaying of the dreaded human.

And even though he appears human, his abilities are anything but. He would at best be a subclassification of the human genus. Kind of like how the X-men are human, but they're a subclassification of the human genus, and are commonly reffered to as meta-humans. They appear human, but their abilities do not fit that of humans.

Also, humans still exist, just not on the Earth of this world, having been removed when the Last Judgement of humanity took place. They aren't extinct, they're just not in the place that they used to be.

But that's my thoughts regarding your comment and how I understand this story.

I like the fact that he turned into a alicorn. It gives him more options so far as the three branches of pony magic are concerned. Not only that, but with him being the only male alicorn it's going to really bother Celestia, Luna, and Cadence --and that's always a good thing.

Well, the story was fun for me while it lasted. This is where I stop reading.
Hope you continue to enjoy writing it.

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love long chapters their the best,
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interested on how this will go, hoping he gets thrown into politics and the battlefield therein
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interesting design choice, large wings, neat

I find nothing wrong with this. Forgot to like this story.

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More!!!!!!!!!!!! :P

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Just replace Toy with Stone in "Toy Story"

Ah damn, I ran out of chapters to binge.

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Oh don't worry, next ones coming.

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Hell yeah! Good to hear.

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Once again the system is keeping the good stories down, but have you consider the time of day you upload them as well? I've found with my story that chapter that go up during the morning often get over looked as people have jobs, school, ect. When I upload around 7-10 though is when I see the most viewers at once reading the chapter. Just a (hopefully) helpful bit of information the next time you finish a chapter.

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That's certainly a good idea, I'll be sure to do that as I make the next chapters.

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Update?

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It's coming along, though Absol359 does has the right idea.

While its not a favorable outcome, its a needed outcome. Besides my horrible memory, the story is a great read.

Who's ready for Chapter Five! #GetHypeNow

I wish there was a human transforms into a pony tag.

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Yeah, and its unfortunate that it'll happen, due to the more often produced stories that are in … various qualities.

Should have went with Legion what happened to the angel that slept in the chamber with him?

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What angel? As there was no one else with them.

Archangel Michael, in the prologue. Must of made it back to heaven before the the gates closed.

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He did.

So you have a character who’s whole stigma is that he’s the last human, chosen by god, and has 1000 HUMAN souls in his body ..... and then you change him into a horse ??? So his fighting style and skills and methods of combat that he adquiere through out his long and painful life just went to shit ? I mean, it doesn’t matter how skill you are , loosing your hands will totally destroy any hope of regaining his previous battle style. Honestly this annoys me to no end, but then again is your story so good luck.

Why would they not just hide the horn or wings with illusions...

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Celestia shook her head, “No Luna. We both know that Yaks can sense illusion magic being used and the Griffons are currently so paranoid that the last meeting had their guards search and scour this castle to make sure nothing was out of place or a threat....

I had reasoned (In Celestia's perspective) while it wouldn't be a common occurrence for an ambassador to visit, all it'll take is just one of the two races to notice and start demanding more answers before revealing the whole thing to the populace to discredit or hold against the Princesses.

Just thinking about it caused Celestia to join in the laughter, adding, “Maybe a chapter later, they sob their heart out to their planned loved one and they begin dating not but a few paragraphs later?”

And you basically spoilert us right clever

"Hmm ... . Perhaps this spell took a long look at us all and simply gave up?" The stallion muttered as he sat back on his rear legs and, after maintaining that he wouldn't fall over, placed one of his forelegs’ knees to his chin in an awkward attempt of making a thinking gesture. He nearly abandoned it when he had to move his other foreleg to balance and steady himself, "Or perhaps what we are ... were, is similar to what an Alicorn is."

The spell looked into legions mind and said fuck this and just left

“Our name shall be Rising Dawn, for we have awakened in a new age and a new world, and we have arisen once again with a new purpose."

I thought his name should be legion but this also fits.

I personally never liked the whole turning humans' into ponies shtick, but the writing and story is so good that it doesn't matter. Gonna keep chugging through these chapters, and hopefully be caught up by midnight!

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And its easy to understand how tiring and overly done the schtick still is. And more often than not there isn't sufficient reasons built behind the reason why, though during MLP G4's run it did seem the popular trend to authors to think it would be fun/cool for their characters to be transformed. Though I think now may be the time that the genre may be tried again, with more thought and consideration behind them, unless its simple parody. I don't really have the impossible expectations on others to be highly skilled, considering I'm no professional author it'd be hypocritical of me to do so.