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longer, so far the chapters seem rushed and doesn't contain as much character thought
865830 Okay,
Longer: 1
Shorter:0
867616
...........forgive my spelling
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I am a horrible critiqe (or critic?) but this is unbelievably entertaining
Longer please
and great story everything was great just needs to be longer
873632 Thanks
875004
Longer: 2
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LONGEEER
879695
Longer: 3
Shorter: 1
GAH you torture me.
880012 I'll torture you even more, want a cupcake?
903960 Yes, Rainbow Dash flavor please?
904239 ok
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904239 oh, and btw you screwed up the counter, it's longer: 3 : Shorter: 0 : :P
904302 Oh yeah sorry lol
Sweet. My weapon of choice would be...
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Or
Diamond sword!!
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912329 SAFETY TORCH
Put it on your porch!
I love toby XD
first off, longer chapter second, it seemed like you randomized it a lil' too much and made it strained as a result. just my opinion though.