Yay. The sequel is here finally.

i hope that if twilight keep treating him that way he starts responding to her with human bluntness

Let's see where this takes us. I have high hopes that you will reach the same quality as its predecessor.

makes sense our human-pony would act like that, know i would.
was it ever revealed how long Atchmon was actually there alone?

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6 years. There's some references to things that happened in the show. Like the dragon migration, the releasing of night mare moon, and Discord's plunder seed vines. I imagine he was there a year before Twilight went to Ponyville.

I almost forgot about this series

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6 years? feels Rarity saved him more than he saved Rarity

Glad to see the sequel as Jewel is probably one of my top 3 favorite stories on this site. Just a couple of minor mistakes i spotted

Of course, Princess; you're friend has been through quite an ordeal,

Wrong use of you're, should be your

you've lost two and a half Stone since you're last check-up

Same deal again, you used you're instead of your

Looking forward to where this is going, love your work

Yessssssssss

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Changed. Thank you!

This is a good read so far and I can't wait to read more of it.

Ferrier

I think you want farrier

I can't believe it. The Sequel. FINALLY!

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Ty!

I wasn't expecting a sequel, but when I saw "Atchmon" in the featured box summaries I knew that i had to check it out. Glad I did. Looking forward to seeing what happens next!

Hopefully Twilight or the Princess dont rush to conclusions now..

Just saw Atchmon in the featured page and my heart leapt! Soooooo excited!
Thank you so much for making a sequel!
And it's as good as I was hoping for!
Also, "Ponies based their hunting on movement and friendship, right? " I loved that line.

Guys,
We did it...

This was really great to read! Had my attention the whole way through (probably cause I was so excited to see this finally lol).
I liked how he was well, playing with himself I like to think most people would do similar in that situation, not everyday your dick gets bigger lol. I'm looking forward to seeing them get used to being back in civilization, should be really fun to watch play out!

Awesome sauce it's nice to see a continuation of this story

Wait a minute I just got the names of both stories are plays on two movies from the 80's

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Yep, lol. I'm puntastic like that. It's a big part of what I enjoy writing.

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I love that line too! Still makes me laugh.

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You sir are awesome and that pun wasn't like a bad punch to the face like i seen some puns be. No it was a lovely unassuming pun that you didn't know was there till it makes you do a double take. Bravo

Interesting, although i am questioning where the hell does Blueblood have to do with any of this. Will atchmon fight him to the death for Rarity's heart!? I don't know

Although i feel like Sweetie Belle is going to do something bad, like Anon-A-Miss levels of bad and i do not like that.

It's a good day to be alive when this story gets updated

I was thinking this through the original, but for some reason the name Atchmon makes me think of Digimon for some reason. Heh, that would be a fun dream for Luna to stumble onto. Atchmon dreaming that he was one.

oh a piece of candy! being honest, kinda forgot about this after the first story finished glad to see this!

wait wtf how did i not notice when this came out!? great first couple chapters tho, had me giggling every couple lines it felt like. lookin' forward to the rest!

I love your worldbuilding and making ponies story, where ponies really are ponies and can't be replaced with creatures from other universe, where story still makes sense.

Please, write more, it so so good, I need my fix.

Is the Main character the same size and height as Trouble Shoes btw?

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No. I consider Troubleshoes a totally different breed of pony. Atchmon is closer to Shining Armor in size and body type. Though Big Mac will be larger than both of them, since I consider him a Draft, whereas Troubleshoes is clearly a Clydesdale breed. I'd like Atchmon to not be the biggest, since he wasn't really born a pony. But sticking close to something from the show would make things easier when imagining what he looks like.

If there was a size chart it would be:
'standard' Earth pony stock (background stallions)< Shining Armor model<Big Mac<Trouble Shoes<Rock Hoof

I believe I missed it somewhere, but what tribe is he?

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I left it intentionally ambiguous. That way I could pull from as many Native American myths and stories I felt would fit well into mlp.

Can he still eat meat? I hope he can still eat meat..

Glad to see Jewel of the everfree get a sequel, but ugh that title makes me think this is a joke/meme story.

I am very excited for the continuation of the Jewel of the everfree

Haha, I can see the shenanigans with Sweetie Belle already.

Quick question, why is this in the The Good HiE List. I understand Atchmon used to be human but he's not anymore. So there's no long an H in that HiE.

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Thought I remembered a "human turns into something" folder in that group.

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Oh snap you right my b. That premise doesn't make sense to me but hey not my rules.

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Ikr?

just read through this for the fourth time really can't wait for the next chapter

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working on it!

Amazing chapter! Can't wait to read the rest!

His family jewels were significantly larger compared to his little old coin purse. Now they looked like a pair of ripe hanging fruit ready to burst with its juices .

Ah yes, the important stuff

Whar may atchmone hade done to warrant him tartarus?

Really good to see you working on another story. The first was great!

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Thanks, I'm almost done with the next chapter. This story isn't going to be one of those "never-ending" self-inserts that seem to be super popular around here. I have a beginning a middle and an end planned as well as a couple themes and lessons to learn.

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I wouldn't take things that far... with her specifically.