Keeps a closed lacinia closed and can help close one that's already come open. So rather than dispersing any actual horniness, it just lets a pony cover the physical signs of that horniness. Helpful in some situations, in other words, but not in all.
919086 Indeed, I agree with your sentiments on the unique look at the biology of creatures I consider closer to aliens than earth horses. It does make it harder to write though but the path less taken is the more exciting
I don't really care for AJ being a "sex is unnatural" conservitive type because of her countryness but this story is really enjoyable Me willing to keep going dispite my bias does this story much credit.
Something like the phrase "keep it closed, keep it closed, keep it closed, closed, closed" sung silently over and over again to the Lone Ranger portion of the William Tell Overture...
Awwww! HermyShy is best Shy. I love with what you did here. The whole spell to hide the sexy bit and Flutters secretly has stallion bits makes me highly amused. *Bro Hoofs*
But then...then Fluttershy opened her eyes, brought her gaze up from the floor. And the gorgeous blue-green of those eyes, all full of trust, wavering and deep as the farm pond on a summer afternoon, Applejack felt herself teeter on the brink of 'em for half a second; then in she fell, the suddenly splintered parts of her brain agreeing that she would never be free of those eyes again for as long as she lived.
To let the Ponies here go about their lives without external genitalia, but then the Cakes had those babies, and I started wondering how that worked. Out of that came this story and the sequel and the sequel's sequel: 125,000 words just from one little "I wonder..."
We get more into the specifics of Fluttershy's condition, but the short answer is: while she has many female genetic and somatic traits, she has no vulva.
An anti-horny-spell?
It's just a penis, not love!
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The spell:
Keeps a closed lacinia closed and can help close one that's already come open. So rather than dispersing any actual horniness, it just lets a pony cover the physical signs of that horniness. Helpful in some situations, in other words, but not in all.
Mike
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Ah!
...can you cast it at other ponies...?
"This never happened to me before!"
I love this story and can't wait for more. What an original take on pony biology, a quality we need to see more of around here, keep up the good work!
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Indeed, I agree with your sentiments on the unique look at the biology of creatures I consider closer to aliens than earth horses. It does make it harder to write though but the path less taken is the more exciting
I don't really care for AJ being a "sex is unnatural" conservitive type because of her countryness but this story is really enjoyable
Me willing to keep going dispite my bias does this story much credit.
918315 Cock-blocking in the making. For both parties. sounds like a prank of Celestia proportions.
I'd actually like to hear the spell. Just think it would be interesting
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I keep imagining:
Something like the phrase "keep it closed, keep it closed, keep it closed, closed, closed" sung silently over and over again to the Lone Ranger portion of the William Tell Overture...
Mike
Applejack became horny for the first time after seeing Fluttershy's meat. That's just weird!
I am glad it wasn't love though; that would've been bad.
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Love is like spring:
It can really hang you up the most.
Mike
Wait why does Fluttershy have a...
Awwww! HermyShy is best Shy. I love with what you did here. The whole spell to hide the sexy bit and Flutters secretly has stallion bits makes me highly amused. *Bro Hoofs*
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Thanks!
I'm in the planning stages for the third in this series, and I hope to start posting it before the 4th season kicks in in November.
Mike
That. Was. Beautiful.
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I wanted AJ to fall in love:
So I thought I'd try constructing an image that drew directly from the phrase itself. Glad you liked it!
Mike
Alrighty,now that we both know that ponies "close up" behind and that rarity came to the mix,let me give you this picture:
i.imgur.com/UFJs0Ut.png
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I was perfectly willing:
To let the Ponies here go about their lives without external genitalia, but then the Cakes had those babies, and I started wondering how that worked. Out of that came this story and the sequel and the sequel's sequel: 125,000 words just from one little "I wonder..."
Mike
You say "Would you kindly" afterwards.
So is this Futashy or Butterscotch? It doesn't mention a vulva, but it doesn't mention the lack of one either.
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In the sequel:
We get more into the specifics of Fluttershy's condition, but the short answer is: while she has many female genetic and somatic traits, she has no vulva.
Mike
I'm not feeling any emotion that I'm used to being a cause of tears
so why am I crying
I don't understand
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Poor AJ:
Nothing's ever easy when you're a fictional character...
Mike