This is so very strange - but definitely not worth all those thumb-downs people have given it. I actually find myself wanting to read the next chapter, just to see what happens.
The "Gore" tag to this because of that first chapter, but I didn't want to give any potential readers the wrong impression. Still, if it makes someone called "Mr. Carnage" uncomfortable, I find myself thinking I might hafta reconsider...
Essentially, this is what happens when a guy who's never been in a relationship starts thinking about the idea of "shipping." Right now, I've got four more chapters planned to finish the thing, and I'll advise folks to check the story's description for links to several other more enjoyable "shipping" tales.
Okay, I lost it at Futashy. I really don't know what to make of this because it's so well written and yet the subject matter makes me want to scream. I'm still laughing though... and following you. I need to know what happens next.
From the way that AJ says the Everfree Forest "ain't natural" in both the 2nd episode and in Bridle Gossip. 'Cause if natural means something that's arranged and helped along by ponies, then love and sexual attraction and all that would be absolutely unnatural, the way that stuff can overwhelm a pony and make her act against her better judgment. There'll be a little more about why Applejack thinks this way coming up.
This is filthy and cute, you know? I love that mix, when you take something that is usually very dirty and try to handle it with care. This story might get dirtier, or it might not, I'm not sure so far, but I do know I like it and will favourite and all that. Iit has some nonstandard spellings of their names, and strange take on their genitals, but- I like it.
It's amazing that I've never seen this until now, but I had to read three chapters into this story to know it was pure gold. I fucking love the dialogue you use here. And the whole idea behind this story is both sweet and sexy at the same time.
This is interesting, in a very unique and rather odd way. I'll admit a part of me really doesn't know what to make of this. Nothing against futa, guess the writing will take a bit more getting used to. Onto the next chapter then.
"Well, we's clearing stumps, and we can always can use help with that."
Clearing stumps is one, tough, son of a bitch. Dynamite works well enough, but I'm guessing they are going to resort to picks, shovels, and Big Mac's strength.
"I'll have to show you."
That's...a big gun you got there Flutters. Do you have the concealed-carry permit for it?
Fluttershy's hind legs spread slightly, a swelling there, her delicate skin bulging till her lacinia parted like a perfect apple blossom, and—
So she does have a penis? Great! That ending: Aw yeah! Applejack's gettin' laid!
favourite without thumbs up?
thumbs down without criticism?
Has discord gotten loose again?
Ponies and tampons?
Fluttershy with a penis?
Im strangely intrigued
Are you adding more chapters? I'm seriously debating tracking this.
This is so very strange - but definitely not worth all those thumb-downs people have given it. I actually find myself wanting to read the next chapter, just to see what happens.
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I was seriously considering adding:
The "Gore" tag to this because of that first chapter, but I didn't want to give any potential readers the wrong impression. Still, if it makes someone called "Mr. Carnage" uncomfortable, I find myself thinking I might hafta reconsider...
Essentially, this is what happens when a guy who's never been in a relationship starts thinking about the idea of "shipping." Right now, I've got four more chapters planned to finish the thing, and I'll advise folks to check the story's description for links to several other more enjoyable "shipping" tales.
Mike
Okay, I lost it at Futashy. I really don't know what to make of this because it's so well written and yet the subject matter makes me want to scream. I'm still laughing though... and following you. I need to know what happens next.
This is going in all sorts of interesting directions and I heartily approve. But then, I have a weakness for well-written FutaShy.
Bwuahahahaha this is insane
Wait, Fluttershy's a... OH SWEET CELESTIA!!!
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I'm madly extrapolating:
From the way that AJ says the Everfree Forest "ain't natural" in both the 2nd episode and in Bridle Gossip. 'Cause if natural means something that's arranged and helped along by ponies, then love and sexual attraction and all that would be absolutely unnatural, the way that stuff can overwhelm a pony and make her act against her better judgment. There'll be a little more about why Applejack thinks this way coming up.
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Until today:
I had no idea that Futashy was already a meme. Apparently I don't get out on the internet nearly as much as I ought to...
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And there's:
More to come!
Mike
you sir have my thumbs and my approval
This is filthy and cute, you know? I love that mix, when you take something that is usually very dirty and try to handle it with care.
This story might get dirtier, or it might not, I'm not sure so far, but I do know I like it and will favourite and all that.
Iit has some nonstandard spellings of their names, and strange take on their genitals, but- I like it.
Well well .....
I approve
I'll take a chapter 4, please
I'm so confused... I need more explanation of this anatomy. How do My Little Pony plots work in this universe?
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On the way, but probably not till next week--I'll be down in San Diego for Comic-Con the rest of this week.
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My guess? normally they look just like the cartoon characters; nothing betwixt the nethers. Say the magic word, and it pops out.
Like bears. Only with a magic word.
You could have gone your entire life without knowing about how bear bits worked, too.
This is bizarre, somewhat disturbing and kinda gross.
Please, continue this story!
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That was definately interesting.
It's amazing that I've never seen this until now, but I had to read three chapters into this story to know it was pure gold. I fucking love the dialogue you use here. And the whole idea behind this story is both sweet and sexy at the same time.
This is interesting, in a very unique and rather odd way. I'll admit a part of me really doesn't know what to make of this. Nothing against futa, guess the writing will take a bit more getting used to. Onto the next chapter then.
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I'm glad it's:
Turning out to be a good sort of odd!
Mike
Okay,it doesn't fit that much,but...
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I tell ya:
There's a video for everything these days!
Mike
Clearing stumps is one, tough, son of a bitch. Dynamite works well enough, but I'm guessing they are going to resort to picks, shovels, and Big Mac's strength.
That's...a big gun you got there Flutters. Do you have the concealed-carry permit for it?
So she does have a penis? Great!
That ending: Aw yeah! Applejack's gettin' laid!