After stealing the Crucible Dr. Samuel Hayden sends the Doom Marine somewhere he can't interfere. Neither of them expected that place to be Equestria. Or that demons would show up there too. The ponies are about to see a lot of ripping and tearing.
Deciding that it would be more of a hassle not to, he chose to follow the rules just this once and handed the ticket over. The stallion punched the ticket and gave it back. “Enjoy your trip!” he said cheerfully before going to check the tickets of the other passengers. The Doom Slayer sighed and took a seat.
The Doom Slayer is taking a relaxing trip to Canterlot on the Friendship Express............ Did not see that coming
"Like, it’s to the point that you have to wonder if taking these things down is the whole reason he existed in the first place.”
Subtle fourth wall break. Proper use of Discord as a side character. Two points awarded, well done.
As a transitional chapter this is solid enough. Discord definitely stole the show but his interaction with the Doom Slayer was where he took the show to. Having a jester-like chaos deity type interact with the embodiment of all things Metal is never going to be cut and dry, but I think you did an admirable job here. Part of me wonders if the Doom Slayer would tolerate any magic at all, but at the same time they're not demons so it's a little surprising he even acknowledges their existence at all. Especially since to him most everyone he's run into so far is basically just demon-fodder. Discord though, assuming this is mid-Doom 2016 (which I assume it is), he would assume is a bit of a Samuel Hayden type. My guess is that he'd probably only listen to Discord if he was gonna do whatever he was asked to do anyways. Not kill ponies, yeah, sure, Slayer can do that. Save the important people, whatever, usually he doesn't save living people but he's flexible. Has to be flexible to do the shit he does, his yoga game must be insane.
Oh god that end there!
Glad to see this update, can't wait to see more of this.
I have to wonder why they are here. I blame Twilight.
7917081 Meant to write "her." Thanks for pointing that out.
Good to see that this is not dead. Looking foward for more.
7917994 1:04 - 1:55 is basically what Discord saw when he peered into the Doom Slayer's head.
They are cruel and merciless.
But you... you shall be worse.
Rip and Tear.
Rip and Tear... until it's done!
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I just imagined the DoomGuy just plopping on to the chair with his arms crossed the whole ride.
7959608 That's actually going to be pretty accurate.
7959613 I can only wonder how the passengers will react to him.
Lol! How did I know he was on a train?
moreeee pleeeaaaaseee
You know, should Doom guy ever come across shinigamisparda's Gilgamesh (unlikely though that may be), I hope he plays this song.
8076871 I'll fix it. Do you like the story otherwise?
8077002 I didn't realize that this was your glorious child. Makes sense now that I think about it.
The train is the best thing ever.
I'm really liking this so far, and it's ripped it's way into the featured bar!
The Doom Slayer is taking a relaxing trip to Canterlot on the Friendship Express............ Did not see that coming
DoomGuy has a resume? Can I see it? I wonder if I could hire him to deal with the tourists and their need to almost hit people.
Subtle fourth wall break. Proper use of Discord as a side character. Two points awarded, well done.
As a transitional chapter this is solid enough. Discord definitely stole the show but his interaction with the Doom Slayer was where he took the show to. Having a jester-like chaos deity type interact with the embodiment of all things Metal is never going to be cut and dry, but I think you did an admirable job here. Part of me wonders if the Doom Slayer would tolerate any magic at all, but at the same time they're not demons so it's a little surprising he even acknowledges their existence at all. Especially since to him most everyone he's run into so far is basically just demon-fodder. Discord though, assuming this is mid-Doom 2016 (which I assume it is), he would assume is a bit of a Samuel Hayden type. My guess is that he'd probably only listen to Discord if he was gonna do whatever he was asked to do anyways. Not kill ponies, yeah, sure, Slayer can do that. Save the important people, whatever, usually he doesn't save living people but he's flexible. Has to be flexible to do the shit he does, his yoga game must be insane.
Tsk, tsk...
Not going with the metal cover for maximum DOOM synergy.
Even comes from the album "War is the Answer".
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You are a warrior of culture as well, I see.
In that case, we can both agree that the Doom Slayer is...IMMORTALIZED