After stealing the Crucible Dr. Samuel Hayden sends the Doom Marine somewhere he can't interfere. Neither of them expected that place to be Equestria. Or that demons would show up there too. The ponies are about to see a lot of ripping and tearing.
Rainbow Dash, her boisterous nature taking over, flew up right in front of “Doomy’s” face. “Let’s go, tough guy! You wanna piece of me!? I’ll buck your head clean off!” she shouted, her hooves raised and throwing out quick punches meant to intimidate him. “C’mon, whaddya got!? You ain’t nothin’! You ain’t-!”
Rainbow was cut off by Doomy quickly reaching his hand out and clamping it around her neck. The pegasus struggled to breathe as she tried to pull herself away, ineffectively hitting his arm to try and make him let go.
goddammit rainbow dash one does not insult, nor fuck with the DooM Guy.
The Doom Slayer thought for a moment, then turned to look at the glass container in front of him. He raised his fist and smashed it through the glass. The two store owners bolted out through the back, not seeing the Doom Slayer remove his helmet.
Wow, that was good, especially considering you haven't even played the game. I've put like 300 hours into it and I can say you got the combat pretty much down pat. Though idk having the gameplay mechanics like ammo pickups and such in there feels a bit odd to me, I'd probably personally have him just absorbing energy from the demons as he kills them, which is roughly what the demons describe him doing in the Slayers Testament. But at the same time maybe him never running out of ammo and such would be kinda weird too. In the end I'm just nitpicking, great story so far!
Great story so far, very Doomish. The only thing I'd say needs tweaking is all the head shoting. Game wise yeah it's a great strategy, but Doom wise it's not nesicary other then like executions, badass and "Fuck you!" Moments.
Three more Hell Knights came at him from behind, but he ignored them and jumped onto another roof, meeting two more Imps, the first his melleed in the head, causing it to stagger, which he then grabbed from behind, twisted its neck, and ripped its bottom jaw off, gaining more health and armor.
meleed* I know, it still looks weird but it's the (generally agreed upon) correct spelling when describing CQC actions in past tense, since 'melee' when used as a verb isn't actually proper English (for now, according to all dictionaries besides Urban Dictionary), given the word is a noun.
Two things as my first impression. I appreciate the want to display the Doom Slayer's badassness in text, but that fight scene was maybe a little too long. Since I'm not actually playing the game it wasn't as engaging. In text I think it would have served you well to be a little more overtop with the violence, and to also trim the fat a little so it didn't take up so much space. The second, something minor, I say don't drop the song that inspires the title at the end. Maybe make a blog with a playlist of all the title songs, but what starts as a subtle nod to a cool song becomes a swift bludgeoning when you just slap it on the end there.
Since we’re not playing the game, you don’t need to keep track of health and ammo drops. If you want to work it into the story, if I recall correctly, the ingame lore states that Doom Slayer (and/or his Armor) absorbs argent (hell) energy to heal himself when he kills a demon. Just mention that factoid at some point, maybe twilight asks him how he heals. As for ammo, I wouldn’t even bother keeping track. It’s Doom, he has ammo until the plot demands otherwise.
This is just my opinion of what can be improved, Im still liking the story, one of the better Doom crossovers I’ve read, and you have my like and fav.
I heard DOOM so I came.
Then I went here to see what's up.
Instant fave cause this is going to be awesome!!!
7771184 That took me a second.
Awesome chapter, you are doing a amazing job. I can't wait to read the next one.
I saw this like to see what's next
I have but one thing to say: KEEP IT COMING!
When is your Gilgamesh fic going to update?
7771798 I should have more time over the next month, so hopefully not too long.
Rip and Tear, my friends
RIP, AND, TEAR!!!
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Super glad to see that this isn't a one off. Cant wait for more ripping and tearing.
Soo looking foward to this.
When you Rip and Tear just right...
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goddammit rainbow dash one does not insult, nor fuck with the DooM Guy.
DooM Guy Smash
Yo continue this dude Jesus you got the fight scene so damn perfect PLEASE, continue I don't think I could live if this story remains incomplete
Wow, that was good, especially considering you haven't even played the game. I've put like 300 hours into it and I can say you got the combat pretty much down pat. Though idk having the gameplay mechanics like ammo pickups and such in there feels a bit odd to me, I'd probably personally have him just absorbing energy from the demons as he kills them, which is roughly what the demons describe him doing in the Slayers Testament. But at the same time maybe him never running out of ammo and such would be kinda weird too. In the end I'm just nitpicking, great story so far!
Good stuff
Great story so far, very Doomish. The only thing I'd say needs tweaking is all the head shoting. Game wise yeah it's a great strategy, but Doom wise it's not nesicary other then like executions, badass and "Fuck you!" Moments.
in case someone needs....
7917994 I still love that!
meleed*
I know, it still looks weird but it's the (generally agreed upon) correct spelling when describing CQC actions in past tense, since 'melee' when used as a verb isn't actually proper English (for now, according to all dictionaries besides Urban Dictionary), given the word is a noun.
Regardless; the extra L shouldn't be there.
Not gonna lie. Was grinning like an idiot through most of this chapter.
Two things as my first impression. I appreciate the want to display the Doom Slayer's badassness in text, but that fight scene was maybe a little too long. Since I'm not actually playing the game it wasn't as engaging. In text I think it would have served you well to be a little more overtop with the violence, and to also trim the fat a little so it didn't take up so much space. The second, something minor, I say don't drop the song that inspires the title at the end. Maybe make a blog with a playlist of all the title songs, but what starts as a subtle nod to a cool song becomes a swift bludgeoning when you just slap it on the end there.
Since we’re not playing the game, you don’t need to keep track of health and ammo drops. If you want to work it into the story, if I recall correctly, the ingame lore states that Doom Slayer (and/or his Armor) absorbs argent (hell) energy to heal himself when he kills a demon. Just mention that factoid at some point, maybe twilight asks him how he heals. As for ammo, I wouldn’t even bother keeping track. It’s Doom, he has ammo until the plot demands otherwise.
This is just my opinion of what can be improved, Im still liking the story, one of the better Doom crossovers I’ve read, and you have my like and fav.
"doomy" definitely deserves the title absolute badass, this just proves it
They SHOULD be!
This is why you dont f**k with the one the only dooooom slayer
That was fucking dope!
Hope the next chapters bring some more interaction with the ponies
And some more high quality ripping and tearing