• Member Since 12th Jun, 2012
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Blade


Nobody of importance.

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The Wonderbolts have given Rainbow Dash the opportunity to try out for their elite squad. During this moment of triumph, her thoughts turn to her childhood and the doubt that lurks behind her facade of confidence. Rated Teen for violence and dark themes.

This is the first in a series of stories with similar themes, collectively titled The Mask. It is based on the following poem: http://bit.ly/zthle

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Comments ( 5 )

Wow. That sure is... Quite a different tale from the original one :o Great story ^^

This is a really well written story. I think that using the thoughts and contrasting the thoughts to the actions is a tool rarely used in Fanfiction. It was especially well done during the part where Rainbow Dash was performing the Sonic Rainboom. I am awaiting your next post.

So Pinkie Pie was an actual physcopathic murder who tried to hide her feelings by smiling, and now Rainbow Dash was beaten up by her father for no apparent reason, so who's going to be the next one to reveal their dark secrets? :applejackunsure: :raritydespair: :fluttercry: :twilightoops:

Comment posted by Blade deleted Mar 27th, 2013

845718 Fluttershy huh, wonder what she's hiding and on I don't think it's a shed where she secretly murders other ponies. :trixieshiftright:

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