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Starlight Glimmer is rewarded with new responsibilities in the wake of her ordeal with Queen Chrysalis and the changelings ... but she can't forget her past transgressions, even if all her friends have moved on from them. Now, her past is ready to return to the forefront.

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I'm rooting for Equality Starlight. She was best villain.

Comment posted by Cozybro deleted Dec 9th, 2016

“Look for anything natural … trees, rocks, rivers. Anything that Discord didn’t change to sweet sweet candy … because Chrysalis’ anti-magic ability blocked him.”

I love it when Pinkie Pie is clever like this.

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This nice. Need more.

“Not enough, I’d say,” Twilight counters as she turns to face Starlight. “We all owe you our lives. Us, the Princesses, my brother, my foal nephew … seriously, all of Equestria has you to thank.”

Um... Was Flurry Heart retconned into a boy?

7825334 Nope, that was just a goof. I fixed. Thx for letting me know!

This was a good story. I wonder why it has no upvotes yet. (Don't worry, I'll fix that soon.) Perhaps you should try fixing the narration: fiction is generally written in past tense, not present.

“Isn’t it? A couple cans of paint, a simple stunning spell on select ponies … you were easy to fool. Too easy, if you really have no sense of conflict within you. No, you didn’t see through those deceptions because you want to believe that you did all that. You fight your true feelings … you’ve been misled by Twilight and her notions of ‘friendship’ … but you know where you really stand. And your power … our power … combined, we could rule all of Equestria.”

Okay you only really triggered a panic attack

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