Getting Accepted to the Canterlot University is a huge thing, a very huge thing, and Bumble Hooves has every intention of making it big. Of course, though, something he's carrying that is just as huge may be the key to helping him out.
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So, is Big Mac bigger than bumble? It would make sense, but just checking.
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Naw, Bumble is bigger, but Rainbow hasn't been with him. Still, Big Mac isn't a slouch in the slightest. He's still quite a bit larger than average. It's reasonable to imagine that he's close to Bumble on size. Perhaps a bit less girth, nearly the same length. But part of what makes Bumble's so huge is that it's on an Unicorn that is so small framed.
I saw the anthro tag for the first time. That explains so much.
Haven't read this, but couldn't help but giggle at the fact that you've written a clop fic about one of BadDragon's OCs.
Bumble Hooves in dildo form
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I do so enjoy when someone realizes what the inspiration for this story is. By the by, those reading, you do have my loving wife to thank for telling me to go head and write the story I was coming up with. Ah, the wonders of a late night, internet searches, and someone who gets inspiration from the weirdest of places.
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Eh, I like writing Antro. I write traditional pony as well, but I've found that I enjoy writing Anthro a bit more.
So, Big Mac and Rainbow Dash are engaged? Well, Cheerilee has no pony to blame but herself. I doubt Cheerilee will find anypony else, after what I read about Berry Punch. The one I do feel bad for is Cally though. She wants her parents back together but she doesn't know why they split up. When/If she does find out, Cheerilee is going to truly be alone.
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Thanks! I like to write when the iron is hot so to speak.
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Wow... so much to respond to. I'm not going to go into who may, or may not, be entering into Bumble's herd, but let's say that it's not finished yet. Also, no Cadence isn't going to get a taste of Bumble's D. To be honest I like Shining Armor and Cadence together. I think that they're a great couple, and while I believe that the two of them are pretty much constantly fooling around, even after they had Flurryheart. to me I like them as they are.
Cheerilee did screw up, royally, but Big Mac has went out of his way to protect Cally's perception of her mother. That's not to say that he doesn't care for Cheerilee personally. He does. She's the mother of his first born, she was his wife, and for several years they were very happy together. Unfortunately Cheerilee's own overthinking and doubts in Big Mac kind of lead to what happened. Again, if it had just been the cheating. If that was all she had done, I'm fairly sure that I could have justified in keeping them together. But you have to consider that Berry, while a good mare, and a good mother, is stigmatized a little in Ponyville as being a tail lifter. Cheerilee's distrust wasn't completely unwarranted, but at the same time there wasn't really any evidence toward it. All it was, and all it would be, was gossip that just got her to believing that maybe he was giving it to Berry.
Now, I plan on going far more in depth in the side story. Right up to their divorce, the same one that as a Princess, Twilight had to oversee.
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I've gotten a few comments, and more than a few PMs, about having Bumble have a 'no-homo' moment in the story. I wanted to work it in, but also keep with Bumble's perceived sexual preferences. Consider that he's still a young stallion, but he's been more interested in mares since hitting puberty than stallions. Is that saying that Bumble wouldn't? Not really. I tend to write characters based on the Kinsey Scale, thus stating that no one is truly heterosexual, and no one is truly homosexual, but instead we are all on this sliding scale. Now, we can be leaning closer to one side than the other, but there's no true binary.
Bumble just happens to be leaning closer to Heterosexual than Homosexual. Certain stimuli can readjust that balance. The introduction of the removal of inhibitors for example, perhaps through drinking, or a spell, could be the very thing to readjust the balance. Will it happen in the main story... you're just going to have to wait and see.
Pet play. Unexpected, but not unwelcome.
7906714 Thank you for not Cadance to the mix. I'm not questioning Big Mac not caring for Cheerilee. I'm saying Cheerilee will not be able to get a new possible mate like Big Mac has. I believe Big Mac has done whatever possible to not let their daughter find out. However, most of Ponyville knows what happened. All it would take is one slip not knowing Cally was in hearing range. I don't think I'll follow what happened beforehand. I'm not a fan of stories with divorces in them.
7906934 I'm at fourteen possible for the future.