Getting Accepted to the Canterlot University is a huge thing, a very huge thing, and Bumble Hooves has every intention of making it big. Of course, though, something he's carrying that is just as huge may be the key to helping him out.
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please write sequel
Normally, I wouldn't touch a story like this with a mile long pole. However, you made me stay, fan- fucking-tastic job on the first chapter.
well consider me strapped in for the ride
I pity this guy. Didn't he have any guy friends that talked to him about mares? And he will remain forever clueless unless he meets a nice mare that likes him and doesn't play games.
7743362 hey hey hey! did he say strap in or strap on?
Not even a quarter through the first chapter and it's already a fucking porn plot and a half. Fukken 6/9.
EDIT: First chapter, and he's already got 3 future fuck-buddies. At least. Christi Deus, I'm going to have a fucking hell of a time.
No, bad author very bad author.
Magma is molton rock below the ground.
When It is above the ground it's lava.
Isn't it supposed to be shuddered rather than shuttered? Unless she closed some kinda stall.
His dick sounds painfully big -- I see it scaring more chicks than it entices. Also, protip: BIG PENIS DOES NOT MEAN GOOD LOVER!
So, just putting this out there, but the golem idea? Sounds a bit like Baymax from Big Hero 6.
I think that dick is way too large. As in, it's a if-you-get-an-erection-you-will-faint-from-blood-loss size dick. The kind of dick that could probably eat a mare alive and only slightly stretch. The kind which would kill you if you got fucked by it. The kind which, if the whole length enters, your womb is going to be mashed into a tiny pulp from the force.
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>gets more excited with every word
You don’t know the core audience for this, eh? Just be glad it wasn’t measured in feet instead of inches.
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Can you imagine this being an actual problem for ponies? Young stallions fainting from lack of blood flow in their uppder heads.
I'm calling it Erecticus Faintitties.
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Um, what? These are equines we're talking about. In real life even ponies can have 14 inches long dicks. So I don't see what's so unfeasible about a cartoon anthro pony having a cock 4 inches shorter.