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ShipperOnDeck


Hi! I write pony fiction--mostly involving those silly humans stumbling their way into Equestria. Comment if you like! Constructive criticism welcomed! (Avatar by Sundown, will remove on request)

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A short story I wrote for an /mlp/ thread waaay back about "doing loving things to your waifu/horsebando". Unfortunately, since my particular art-skill-level makes stick figures look like Da Vinci masterpieces, I decided to try writing out a few stories instead. Now that I've actually got some real fictions going, I'm gonna throw this up here too, just in case anybody wants to read it. If you like it, let me know!

Art done by an anon on that same /mlp/ thread--if anybody knows the artist I will gladly add credit!

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 17 )

7729051
Aw, thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I definitely had fun writing it.

Also, Fluttershy needs faves pls :fluttercry: How can you resist that face? :yay:

7730677 favorite mode engaged cuz I cant say no to fluttershy's face lol

7731186
Of course! Thanks for the read and fave. Nice to see a comment section that's turning out nice for a change, instead of what you usually expect to find in a comment section. :derpytongue2:

7731195
Of course! Flutters is maximally adorable!

7731497 thats right. I also cant say no to the adorableness that is derpy lol

Comment posted by VaeVictis deleted Nov 20th, 2016

great story telling i felt like i was really there! (even if Luna is my wifu) This is a wonderful story with lighthearted comedy, smooth world building, and even some potential to go off into its own miniseries. and i half expected Anon to say no at the end for a plot twist.

Thank you for making this and putting a smile on my face even with life getting ruff. -Goofball

For some reason I have already read this amazing work but didn't like it fave it at all. Shame on me, I will quickly fix that. I will need to read your other waifu stories! :yay:

7740363 I'm glad I could help, if even only for a little while. Unfortunately I wouldn't have the first idea where to go to expand this particular story...I designed it to be a complete package at "the end", but there will definitely be more waifu-ing in the future! Got a second chapter of the Harmony story almost done...obviously traveling for this holiday has kinda put a block on that, but I'll get right back to work as soon as I'm home! Lol

7747210 Glad you like! Hopefully I can come up with other waifu goodness when I'm back home! Working on a bit longer-term venture at the moment...we'll see where that goes! :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by thatotherotherguy deleted Mar 8th, 2017

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God...that voice...it could melt frozen hydrogen--every time she spoke,

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Frozen hydrogen is really easy to melt. Celestia voice is literally room temperature.

8006378 I think he meant to say something like liquid nitrogen. Like her voice could warm liquid nitrogen (or something).

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Fucking everything warms liquid nitrogen. That shit's hella cold.

Look at that brainwashing go. Any normal person wouldn't say that they have 'Learned so much about how friendship is magic!' Screams brainwashing, mate.

8006378
Hmm... maybe it could have melted water, then?

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This story doesn’t give too specific of a timeline as to how long Anon had been in Equestria.

All we know is that Anon and Celestia had known each other for a few days. It could mean that Anon was there long enough to learn about Friendship Magic and come to believe it himself (maybe a couple years or so, maybe longer); or it could simply be maybe after a couple of months after observing everything and putting together an idea in his head.

The story also doesn’t say what season it’s in; but it also sounds like it’s non-canon based. (A story that involves the series, but not within the show’s timeline/universe) So you gotta take that into consideration as well.

That was a great fanfic

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