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Noice.
a clever plan.
Interesting, If he absorbs the evil energy. Will he essentially still be himself and in control? Will it slowly take over him and corrupt his mindset? or will he somehow become like a "Gray" overlord, not evil and not good?
7701408 i for one, do hope for a "greyish" overlord that leans slightly more on the white side than the black side
Guess we'll wait and see what'll happen in the meantime? Btw, you want popcorn? *offers a bowl of popcorn*
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So do I, I really enjoyed the Grayish overlord from his first Fic. Also theirs not a lot of Gray Overlord fics here, I think this is the only one so far.
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7701514 Overlady - Loot Equestria is pretty gray
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Why thank you, I tried my hardest. In all honesty, I allways tend to slip into gray zones somewhat naturaly.
On a silly note, at first glance I read "gay" instead of "gray". Can you have Freudian Slips while reading?^^°
read the story so far. 2/10, like most of these soon-to-be-hiatus displaced stories
7704532 Why does everyone assume that this is displaced? The main feature of displaced is that they communicate with each other, and a void being is the one who sent them to Equestria. This is neither of those, and I don't intend to have any communication in the future. It's not displaced, it's just a fanfic. I don't mean to sound aggressive with any of this.
7704552 i don't mean "displaced" as the group, i mean the genre in general. It's overused genre in these piece of shit soon-to-be-hiatus stories. And just the massive amount of plot copying... ugh, i'm not even expecting this to survive longer than few months before it goes hiatus, like 99,99% of all crossover/displaced stories that aren't one-shot stories or released before genre went to shit.
On other note, your writing is solid, even if the chapters are short and you're skipping shitload of details in order to move events as fast as you can. Plot isn't that bad, but it could use improvement.... and let's not talk about predictable story or short chapters.
7704622 To be fair I am new to writing, but thank you for the criticism, I hope I can improve my writing and make a better story, that isn't just a rehash of old ideas.
7704118 yes
Is the guy supposed to come across as as complete psychopath here? Because he does. Lots more than the old one did.
This guy's a little murder-happy, ain't he? I can see killing those that outright assault him, but if he keeps this up he won't get either no-kill or all-kill achievements!
Tell that to every yandere ever
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Ah, but she'll be drained of her yandereishness by that point, ain't she?
coward
here!? Where
Sadie's
There are two Alphas in a pack, a male and a female.
There are then Betas, which are back-up Alphas in case something happens to one or both Alphas.
Aaaa yesss... My kind of Overlord! Being only as evil as nessecary wile doing the arguable right thing.
Great chapter