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Hmm, I quite liked the qoutes at the end.^^b
Good rewrite so far. Very good.
Ehn. I'm honestly not too sure I like this better than the old version so far. This guy just falls into the whole overlord pattern far too quickly. Random schmuck from the ass-end of nowhere gets dropped in this situation and within minutes he's running around butchering Diamond Dogs like it ain't no thing? The old one felt somewhat more believable in that sense, because there was far more of an adjustment period for the character.
Funny thing, I was thinking of slipping that line into an upcoming story. Gnarl's quote.
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I don't agree, this just feels how the first game started, as technically the Overlord of the first game was one of the heroes but turned evil, or believed to be evil at the start
Hmmm, I see you are a man of culture as well. ;]
Being the nessecary evil is going to be lucrativ
Take out the evil guys and the idiot that come after you and you never run out of fun i guess
Great story start
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Miau to be... Or not to miau... That is the question...
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*bro-hoof* (^.^)/)'(\(^.~)
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Really? Damn... I missed that when i played it.
If it was a family of sheep kitten's they would be shittens