Is After-Life good?

by Horacy

Happy ending. (Optional)

Author's Note:

This is happy ending to chapter "Thoughts". There is no need to read this but if you like happy endings or want to read it you can. It won't be long because there is no need to. This is happy ending / epilogue not prologue. Eghmm ... so, yeah ... I hope you'll like it

Rainbow Dash was standing there, kissing Fluttershy in heaven. Actually, Fluttershy was kissing her. Rainbow was just standing there with bored eyes. 'This isn't what I thought it'll be.' said Rainbow in her mind.

Then Fluttershy broke apart and looked at Rainbow with understanding eyes and told her "You don't like it? You want to be with her, right?"

Rainbow nodded and looked down feeling selfish.

Fluttershy lifted her head with her hoof and told her "I can help you then. It's supposed to be what you really want. I am exactly like Fluttershy ... but you don't love me. You want to be with Fluttershy you spent all your fillyhood. I understand."

And then Fluttershy started to shine bright light. Rainbow needed to cover her eyes with her hoof. And after some seconds she again saw that scene. That gross scene of her body lying lifeless on the ground.

She looked at 'fake' Fluttershy and then said "Do I have really chance to come back to her?"

Fluttershy nodded and said "When Celestia's horn start glowing you'll feel pain but only for ten seconds. But! This pain will be really bad. If you won't be able to survive you won't be able not only be with her on Equestria but come again to heaven. You will be stuck there as lost soul. No one will see you. No one will help you. You will be able only watch what is happening on Equestria, forever. Do you accept this?"

Rainbow Dash nodded her head. Even if she won't survive she will be able to watch REAL Fluttershy. Even if she won't be able to comfort her, she will be able to see real her.

So as 'fake' Fluttershy said Celestia's horn started glowing. In one second Rainbow felt pain. So much pain that she couldn't fight with tears. She screamed, tears falling from her eyes. She almost broke herself but then she imagined herself with Fluttershy lying on grass, looking at sunset. This gave her new amount of energy.

5 seconds.

4 seconds.

3 seconds.

2 seconds.

1 second.

And Rainbow saw bright flash. She felt her body. She felt her dry mouth. She even felt her heart, broken from all of this emotional pain.

She opened her eyes and saw all her friends and Celestia staring at her with tears, but then she saw Fluttershy.

"F-Fluttershy?" she asked weakly.

"R-Rainbow. You're ... alive!" and then she wrapped her hooves around Rainbow and hugged her. Rainbow wrapped her in hug as well and two ponies started crying.

In some time they broke apart and stared at each others. Then Rainbow Dash said "Can you guys help me stand up?"

Fluttershy and Applejack helped her stand up. When Rainbow was standing she couldn't wait any more. She just wrapped a hoof around Fluttershy and kissed her, Fluttershy squeaked a little but then closed her eyes like Rainbow did and moved kiss into more passionate one.

That was everything Rainbow wanted. A kiss. With her love. Her lips were very soft and sweet. She didn't want anything more in life. That was it. That was what she wanted all her life.

When they broke apart Rainbow whispered to her "Fluttershy, I love you so much."

"I love you too. I always did," Fluttershy said as she kissed her again. They again melted to kiss taking each other energy from it.

"Maybe we should leave them alone for a moment," said Princess Celestia and with other four ponies left the castle.

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"And that's how we ended dating and knowing that we loved each other for a long time but hadn't told anyone anything. He he when I think about it I feel really bad for not telling her anything before. It would save us heartbroken emotions. But better late than never right." said Rainbow Dash to her and Fluttershy's parents.

"I must say this was a hell one good story Dashie. But I actually didn't know that you liked mares." said Dash's dad moving his forehoof in circles.

"I didn't and I don't. I love the pony who gave me happiness." said Dash kissing Fluttershy in cheek.

Fluttershy lightly squeaked and said with blush on her face "We can't control the one who we emotionally love." She then licked Rainbow's cheek with her tongue.

Rainbow burned crimson red from embarrassment and said to her "Fluttershy, not here please."

And then everyone laughed beside Rainbow who now was red all over her face, even a little on her neck.

"Wow Fluttershy I wouldn't know you could put that braw pony like Dash to embarrassment. Ha ha." said Fluttershy's dad giggling now.

"Ughh. You'll pay for this Flutters." said Rainbow Dash.

"Oh, I just can't wait Dashie. You remember that day when you said that to me and even then you just came-"

"NO! NOT HERE! PLEASE FLUTTERSHY! I'LL DO WHATEVER YOU'LL WANT!" said Dash who was now hovering above cough.

Four parents were now laughing very hard. Fluttershy giggled lightly and said "I'll remember that Dashie. I still have that toy yo-"

"No! Aghh! I'M GOING TO TOILET! THANK YOU VERY MUCH!" shouted Rainbow and then hovered to bathroom.

"Maybe you want a little help?" asked Fluttershy and heard Rainbow's groan and then her screaming to her "NO!"

This evening was much calmer and funnier than Fluttershy expected

...

And much worse than Rainbow expected.

HAHAHAHA EVEN I WAS LAUGHING HAHAHA. OH dear god. If something like that would happened to me I think I would just burned from embarrassment!

The End.

Comments

[MistyDay]

Still no comment? A shame!

SPOILER ALERT

I liked the story. Though fluttershy embarassing Rd like that maaay be a bit ooc...
And it maaaayyy be a bit far fetched with that returning from the dead if your heart is... Well went splat...

Other than that... Have my upvote.

[Horacy]

7692402 Like I wrote second chapter was optional. It have been written to just fill up the stoty with happy ending or something like that but maybe I went with that Fluttershy thing-y a little bit too far

Still thanks for commenting accually. Comments are much better and funnier than likes. :)

[MistyDay]

7693563 well, true...

I like sad stories... Sometimes. But most of the times i need fluff :p

I tried to weite a story once as well..and it even is.. Well sorta finished but in no way a final draft.

And if i would read it now, there probaly would be countless of places where i'd have to rewirte and such.
But i don't think i'd ever release it... Especially because i don't want to put anyone through correcting it.
My english is decent i guess, but i bet there are toooonnns of places where i goofed...

Soooo kudos to you for writing something worthy of publication :D tis a lot more than i can say about me....

[Horacy]

7695031 Well ... when I first published this story it haven't approved to be published so I searched for Proofreader or someone like that and when I fount LoneUnicornWriter I gave him this story and he made magic and now you can see it on Fimfiction. So don't go that hard on yourself. There always is a way. You can publish some of your stories and if they won't be good who cares? English isn't my main language as well so I have some sort of problems too but I'm writing stories anyway.
I was editing my first story twelve times so magic happens my friend

[MistyDay]

7695382

Yeah maybe... But tbh i feel it's more of a riugh draft and i dunno if it's even worth reading...
I had a look at it and ... Welll so ver cliche... And many things in that story just don't really follow anymore... Sounded better in my head xP

[Horacy]

7700318 If you want I can help you, someway. I don't know how I can or if you want my help but I can if you want. PM me if you would want my help in something I'll be more than happy.