im trying to decide who is cuter: sunset shimmer or starlight glimmer. Also I'm a guy not a girl. my xbox one gamertag is enderknight726
what will happen when sunset shimmer decides to look for this worlds version of herself? What will she find?
Also, there are moments that will break the fourth wall.
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I have an impression to read a list of actions with little connexions between them. Though I like your concept, meet your other me.
Take your time to write it and read it more than twice. You'll eradicate mistakes and improve your writing style. I think of more sensuality, deeper feelings. You have to bring us in their passion and further, in their story.
So re-work on thease chapters and surprise us. I know you can do better !
It seems......rushed, but it's most probably just a read through. I like how the story has something to stand for, and that the general idea is set in place as the base. I would love to see you continue, so keep it up, I expect good from this! (I followed just incase for blogs and that.)
I'm loving it so far!
Thank you all of you. I'll make you all proud
Also just a quick question. I need to come up with a name for sunsets hometown and I'm thinking new Pork city. Do you guys think that's a good idea?
7695674 I haven't read this yet but out of context that sounds like a bad name. Don't know if there's some story context that makes it better or not though. It's usually safe to pick a real world city that matches the feel of the city you want then make it a horse pun.
7695674
This may be too late, but try New Yoke City.
Thanks for the ideas