Through ignorance we cause pain. Through ignorance we cause sadness. Through ignorance we cause anger. But in the end what you don't know cant hurt you, Right? Because ignorance truly is bliss when stuck in the limelight. For hundreds of years, Nightmare moon was stuck on the lunar surface devising her plans for revenge. Today she plans on enacting them.
Follow John Stone and Nightmare Moon as events unfold, Secrets are exposed, and pain resurfaces.
Will Nightmare Moon succeed in her revenge against Celestia? Or will they work through their pain?
Chapters (5)
I have to ask... Is this MoonLight?
7652250 Don't quite understand what you were asking. need a little more information.
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Nightmare Moon x Twilight Sparkle
I was just wondering.
7652740 not quite. it is a ship between nightmare and someone else. but i don't want to spoil to much. but you will get a better idea on who when i finish ch.2.
I Really Hope It is one MoonLight
7661303 Sorry to disappoint, But if you read one of my previous comments you'll get a better understanding.
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sooooo.......... bye
7661356 But, i do have a story planned that is in fact a moonlight ship, so keep an eye out for that.
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Oh Good I Follow You
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Well, first chapter was ok.
When I opened second.....
It just annihilated me with its nuclear warhammer of "I".
I this, I that. I am, when I...
I i i i !
I literally couldn't power through that.
With a little help from Google, here is
THE THING
and another one.
Lets hope it will help improve your writing.
Best regards, but for now I'll put this story in a backburner for later.
8031856 English wasn't my best subject in school, so I never noticed how bad it was till you pointed it out. Also probably didn't help when nobody ever left a comment or feedback except you. I definitely am planning on putting a hold on the story for now and fix that issue as well as others. I'll be making a story update to inform everyone who is currently reading it so I can explain my full scope of things I have planned. Anyway, Thanks for the feedback and I'll make sure to not have a thermonuclear detonation of I's in future updates and works.
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so i was mostly writing as my creativity went. but that only worked for a bit and much now have realized i should have made a basic guide. which is where this is comment is coming from. That Twi-moon is going to be happening, but its not the main "love" focus. Mujaker that's is where that other story I mentioned to you is coming into play. hope to have it out in the next few days to get me back into the writing mood. i originally was planning on writing it after N.R. but well, that would take much longer yeah?😔 if you have any questions, comments, concerns, or constructive criticism in regards to Nightmares Redemption, let me know. I'd Love to hear from you.
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got a bit of news for yah guys (probably confusing as how long its been since you first left a comment to now). so when i first started writing this story i didn't really have an out line.
Cheers!
-Ninjanaut1000
I want to see where this goes if you'll continue.
Neat.