• Member Since 8th Oct, 2016
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Feather Blooms


Hello, pony fans!

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Rainbow Dash. She's always going to the princess, and Twilight doesn't know this. It turns out Celestia is Rainbow Dash's mother, and they write to each other. This makes Twilight and also BFF Applejack confused. Why isn't RD a princess? Who is her sister? Was she at home for school? To figure it out, Twilight needs to look at a reflection made by a shiny-glass prism.

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Comments ( 11 )

This is my first story I've published hope you like it :rainbowderp:

I giggled. Don't know why:rainbowlaugh:

This has many plot holes, the lack on syntax makes it hard to understand.

If Rainbow visits Celestia everyday (of often) then why does Celestia send that letter to Twilight? Does twilight has a sister?? She doesn't have to go, she only need to tell her. Make a pegasus a princess??? That easy? Does Luna already knows? Whats with Applejack suffering because Rainbow is going for 4 days? Seriosly what is going on?

You lost with this.

Eh, not the worst reason to be an alicorn princess.

I still giggled:rainbowkiss:

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My 7 year old daughter wrote this be a little nicer thanks

7660261 sorry again, I didn't get a notification about it. Your daughter write it. That's so sweet, I write my first story at 8, it was a funny experience.

When I said "you lost me" I mean in the story, my cellphone has a costum of eat letters from time to time. I really sure most of the words I been writing are misspelled. Again I apologise for it and/or my lack of tack...

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Oh, good I thought I was the only one who was.

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