Mind control, hypnosis. Things Twilight Sparkle had never considered before. Well, maybe hypnotizing somepony. But she never thought it would be what she wanted for herself—she can learn, however.
The lines are really blurring between Twilight and Pet ... if they were really there to begin with. She's taking that relaxed state into her everyday life, even when Maud's not there. I really liked the end of their scene; orgasm denial and musk are quite nice together. It's just, it was over so fast. Would you mind taking your time a little more in the next chapter?
And Spike wants to cosplay as the Mane-iac. Okay, cool, good to know he's an open-minded kid.
The lines are really blurring between Twilight and Pet ... if they were really there to begin with. She's taking that relaxed state into her everyday life, even when Maud's not there. I really liked the end of their scene; orgasm denial and musk are quite nice together. It's just, it was over so fast. Would you mind taking your time a little more in the next chapter?
And Spike wants to cosplay as the Mane-iac. Okay, cool, good to know he's an open-minded kid.
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Your command is my wish.
I will play a little more with musk and denial with the next one... hrmm, might even write it up tonight.
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I was about to correct your phrasing, but then I got it.
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Not to be that guy, but will we ever find out how this got started?
I mean, don't get me wrong. This fic hits all the right buttons. I just kind of want to know more about the setting so I can enjoy it even more.
Oop, the open-quote went missing where Twi speaks at the end there.
This story is getting more and more distracting in all the right ways.
Wait, she has a piercing, now? You can't leave that scene out, darn it!