• Published 5th Jul 2012
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A Pony out of Place - Ausbrony



A young Ponyta suddenly finds himself in Equestria. Will he ever get home? Will he even want to?

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A little something extra!

Arceus stood in front of the portal that would return him to his own world. Flare, his friends, Celestia and Luna all stood by to bid him farewell.

"Perhaps we shall meet again sometime, Flare Blitz?" Arceus spoke and Flare nodded in response. He fumbled around in Twilight's saddlebags for a moment and produced a small, blue crystal.

"Hey, Lord Arceus? I have a favour to ask."

"Then speak, what is it that you want."

He held up the crystal which levitated over to Arceus. "This is a message crystal, Twilight gave it to me yesterday after the party and I recorded something on it. I was wondering if you could give it to my friends in Alamos Town for me?"

Arceus looked at the crystal and nodded. "Of course." His tail flicked and without a another word he vanished through the rift.

"So what was on that crystal anyway?" Twilight asked him. "If I may ask?"

Flare nodded, leaning against her. "I just wanted to tell my friends that I'm okay and not to worry."


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Sapphira was pissed. Virizion had been no help whatsoever, not that Sapphira expected that bimbo to actually be useful. Gallade had barred the three from entering the town until Sapphira calmed down so the three Pokemon sat in the woods outside the city's outskirts.

"Sapphira darling, do try and calm yourself." Velvet pleaded. "Getting angry won't do anyone any good."

"Yeah, I'd like to go home sometime tonight!" Lucy pitched in.

Sapphira growled and glared. "Flare has been missing for weeks now! Don't you lot care at all!?"

"Of course we do, but we've looked everywhere!" Lucy yelled back. "What more can we do?"

There was a flash of bright light and Arceus appeared before them. Lucy and Velvet nearly wet themselves while Sapphira just glared some more.

"Sapphira, Lucy and Velvet I presume?" Arceus asked and all three nodded silently. "I have something for you, a message from Flare Blitz."

"From Flare!?" Sapphira rushed forward. "He's alive? Where is he? Is he alright?"

Arceus simply gave her the crystal and left without a word, leaving Sapphira to rage.

The crystal shone and a lifesize image of Flare appeared. "Hey there guys... Is this thing on?"

The three Pokemon stared at the foreign-looking creature. It sort of looked like Flare, except that he looked stockier, and his flames had been replaced by real hair. And he had a horn?

"Is that really Flare?" Velvet asked.

"I know you guys are probably worried and I'm sorry that I couldn't see you in person. But I gave Arceus this message so I can tell you guys what's up." The image of Flare took a deep breath and smiled fondly. "First, I want to let you all know that I'm safe and I'm doing well, really well actually. I have made a bunch of new friends where I am and I think I've finally found a place where I truly belong."

"Truly belong?" Velvet tilted his head. "What does he mean by that?"

"Sapphire, I know you're probably super pissed, but it's alright. Just try not to overkill the noobish trainers too much."

Sapphira blushed at the stupid nickname that Flare gave her a while ago. Lucy and Velvet snickered but quickly shut up when Sapphira glared at them.

"Velvet, make sure the girls stay out of trouble and pass on my best wishes to Sakura and Kai when you see them again too, okay?"

Velvet nodded and closed his eyes. Seems that he would have his paws full for a while.

"And Lucy, I kinda wish you were here, your reaction to this place would be priceless!"

"So where the hell are you then!?" The little Pikachu yelled at the projection.

The image of Flare was silent for a second and the Pokemon could hear some muffled voices in the background, followed by the sound of something breaking and some muffled screams. Flare facehooved and continued. "Sorry bout that, Pinkie found Twilight's coffee stash..."

The hell was a Pinkie?

"I've had quite an adventure since I arrived here in Equestria, hope you guys have some time, this will take a while. The whole thing started with that attack on Alamos Town..."

Author's Note:

Just a bit extra to explain that Flare didn't completely shaft his friends.

Comments ( 98 )

... be right back with something
Edit time ^-^

but time is an illusion just as pants are.:moustache:

3273693 wish dude. That's deep.:rainbowderp:

Hmm, Donuts. Isnt there anything they cannot do. :twilightsmile:

Bonus sprinkles for anyone who knows the latest in entangled wormholes lead to gravity. Wormholes that look remarkably like distorted donuts.:pinkiecrazy:

Are you going to revise the sequel as well?
Maybe send Sapphira, Lucy and Velvet to Equestria?

Pinkie Pie on coffee...
pinkie.mylittlefacewhen.com/media/f/img/mlfw2604-Luna_saw_what_you_did_there.jpg

Just a bit extra to explain that Flare didn't completely shaft his friends.

Nope, just Twilight!!:trollestia::trollestia:

3273693>>3273716 Don't Panic, and remember the we live on a world that is mostly harmless.

3275004 - The extra chapters ended up becoming the sequel.

Suddenly infinite loop. Just think for a few seconds.

So looking forward to the rewrite of Flames and Twilight. That is, if you do do that. No, you ARE doing that! ARCEUS DEMANDS IT!

3275086>>3275056 - Already editing it. Check out teh stuff I already posted.

I have a feeling you did this so I would stop complaining, didn't you?!

3273693 This statement is true on so many levels

3273693old man mcguket. Local kook.

3274883 EVIL!!!! EVILL!!! PINKIE EVOLVED INTO SURPRISE!!!

Sequel... I demand it.... or I will sick my Fluffy Pony armies on you. I have 10 armies consisting of 1 million fluffy ponies each. I also have a regiment (50) of Discords. And about 1/2 a million Pinkie Pie's on a mix of Coffee, Sugar, Cocaine, and speed.

3286362 - Um... what?

3294391 From Wikipedia

Sentience is the ability to feel, perceive, or to experience subjectivity. Eighteenth century philosophers used the concept to distinguish the ability to think (reason) from the ability to feel (sentience). In modern western philosophy, sentience is the ability to experience sensations (known in philosophy of mind as "qualia"). For Eastern philosophy, sentience is a metaphysical quality of all things that requires respect and care. The concept is central to the philosophy of animal rights, because sentience is necessary for the ability to suffer, which is held to entail certain rights.

Sapience is often defined as wisdom, or the ability of an organism or entity to act with appropriate judgement, a mental faculty which is a component of intelligence or alternatively may be considered an additional faculty, apart from intelligence, with its own properties. Robert Sternberg has segregated the capacity for judgement from the general qualifiers for intelligence, which is closer to cognizant aptitude than to wisdom. Displaying sound judgement in a complex, dynamic environment is a hallmark of wisdom.

Pinkie plus coffee... We're all gonna die!!

3295449 - That's all well and good, but why are you pointing this out? If I have made an error in my fix, then simply point it out rather than going on a tirade.

3299115 I did that because to me, you didn't seem you understand what point VunderGuy was trying to make, I was just trying to make it more clear. But seriously, the whole misuse of the words sentient and sapient, is a BIG peeve for those of us who know their proper use.

more?! more!! MOOOOOOREEE:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage: no more?:fluttercry: HURRY UP!! IS AWESOME!

3273686 Damnit, I was just about to- you know what, you can have it
....
:flutterrage:

3427727
No, most people don't. You just don't notice, because they aren't constantly inserting Doctor Who into unrelated fanfiction. "Your move."

3429470 - Yep, that he is. Also, FAIRY TAIL FTW!!!

Comment posted by Karsap deleted Nov 2nd, 2013

3431575

It's
It's best if you never question anything I ever say on the account I am slightly insane.:pinkiecrazy:

Well I think you should be put in an insane asylum for saying that!:trixieshiftleft: Also you type It's twice.:facehoof: Because Poor Literacy Is KEWL!

3431617 - Erza fan for life!!

3435079 True but what dose global warming have to do with this story?

3602054 - I already have. Go and check out Flames and Twilight.:pinkiehappy:

I'm also super happy that you like my work.:twilightsmile:

3544426>>3549865 This could only mean one thing Arceus had created... *Then he leans forward to the camera* Mew! scenicreflections.com/files/Mew_Wallpaper_b232a.jpg "MEEEEEEEEEEEW"

I have read this story and I got to say, I love this. I really enjoy reading this. Si o here is a like and fave.

3669887 - Thank you!:twilightsmile: Be sure to check out the sequel once your done.

LIKE NUMBER 1000 AW YEA

3779895 - WHOOOOO!!:pinkiehappy: Thank you.

3780048 That's all good mate, It's nice to see another great story in the 1K club.

3788911 - I like criticism, I believe it makes me a better author. But criticism without reason? Care to explain just how the fic has been ruined? Just because Tia and Luna know about Pokemon.

3892415 just the thought of Pinkie knowing what batponies are.

3893290 - Madame Pinkie knows all~:pinkiecrazy:

3894999 I even know how to get out of the computer!

... Please get back in the computer Pinkie . . .

Okay!

3897747

I even know how to get out of the computer!

I think I know!

:pinkiecrazy:

3902759 - That they do.:twilightsmile:

3940404 - Sorry to hear that. Care to explain why?

3983235 - I know right!!:heart::heart::heart::heart:

4113118 - Oh yeah, I went there.


I regret nothing!!!:scootangel:

4117436 Only when people made an grammar mistake!

heheh, I remember reading this a long time ago, and I'm glad I found it again. :pinkiehappy: Gonna read the sequel soon.

4404253 - People still read this!?:pinkiegasp: I'm glad you like it though.:twilightsmile:

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