Noah prided himself on being a pragmatist. He followed the path that seemed right at the time, until one path led him to a world of ponies. They seemed nice, and Noah tried to be back, with limited success. Despite difficulties, one pony approached.
with most bovines she ever saw - with most bovines she ever saw --or-- with any bovine she'd ever seen
She turned the magazine - She turned the page
She had swore - She had sworn
He may hate her - He might hate her
She's the one that insisted - She was the one that had insisted
tore as it was - torn as it was
at his castle - at this castle (maybe not a typo if Spike thinks of it as his castle too and not just Twlight's)
She remembered that - She'd remembered that
lips or wing - lips or a wing
leading her gazing - leaving her gazing
***** Interesting, interesting...
And now I'm going to be wondering what Twilight's reaction to looking through that magazine is going to be. Taken out of context it gives the entirely wrong impression of humans.
*****
It wasn't as if she'd ever foal. That was for queens
and
She frowned as her jagged horn glowed.
Correct me if I'm wrong, but only queens have the jagged horn, yes? Intriguing that she doesn't know what she is.
Aww! Already reached the end of the chapter! And just as it got really exciting! Can't wait to see the 'surprise' and also Twilight's reaction to that dirty little magazine!
Oh dear. Rose really doesn't grasp just how different Noah is. Though I don't think Twilight's going to do much better, given the limited data available to her...
Yeah, there's no way this isn't going to go somewhere hilarious.
This is getting rich. Maybe Rose isn't so cunning after all, but darnit if that doesn't provide hilarity! On second thought, perhaps Twilight might just enter in the running now that she has the source material Rose has. Let the games begin! Keep going! ;)
So we have Friendship castle but no Starlight Glimmer so somewhere in season 5. Twilight has been EQG world twice so would probably know the relevance of that magazine, not sure what that will divulge to her about Noah...other than healthy male perv...as we all.
Sorry for something so trivial a a double space but a typo is a 'never ending menace of writers everywhere'...err typo.
7573245 Oh. . . uh. . . well. . . I have had something in mind for a while. . . I will put my three current works on hold and have it out within a couple days.
7573281 NO, NO, wasn't expecting that, just if I have a follow on you I'll know when it's out, anyhow quick glance at your other works look's like something else to read any way.
The adventures of a changeling on a mission. I wonder just how many mistakes she is going to make in this relationship? Possibly quite a few.
7571487 I agree
Oh my can't wait for the next chapter
intersting
Is this a sequel to anything?
7571566 Not that I know of.
Well this story is different and interesting. I hope you update it soon, but no rush. ^^
7571605 I plan on daily.
with most bovines she ever saw - with most bovines she ever saw --or-- with any bovine she'd ever seen
She turned the magazine - She turned the page
She had swore - She had sworn
He may hate her - He might hate her
She's the one that insisted - She was the one that had insisted
tore as it was - torn as it was
at his castle - at this castle (maybe not a typo if Spike thinks of it as his castle too and not just Twlight's)
She remembered that - She'd remembered that
lips or wing - lips or a wing
leading her gazing - leaving her gazing
*****
Interesting, interesting...
And now I'm going to be wondering what Twilight's reaction to looking through that magazine is going to be. Taken out of context it gives the entirely wrong impression of humans.
*****
and
Correct me if I'm wrong, but only queens have the jagged horn, yes? Intriguing that she doesn't know what she is.
*****
Literally, even.
7571636 Twilight got her book and nobody was hurt! Sweet success, right? Typos wrangled. I'm blushing, so many of them, sheesh.
But what does Rose have in mind for Noah, and will he like it or be terrified?
7571670 Gotta give the grammar Nazi's something to do.
door, probably
down?
7571943
7571958 Oops, fixed!
Aww! Already reached the end of the chapter! And just as it got really exciting! Can't wait to see the 'surprise' and also Twilight's reaction to that dirty little magazine!
Oh dear. Rose really doesn't grasp just how different Noah is. Though I don't think Twilight's going to do much better, given the limited data available to her...
Yeah, there's no way this isn't going to go somewhere hilarious.
This is getting rich. Maybe Rose isn't so cunning after all, but darnit if that doesn't provide hilarity!
On second thought, perhaps Twilight might just enter in the running now that she has the source material Rose has. Let the games begin!
Keep going! ;)
So we have Friendship castle but no Starlight Glimmer so somewhere in season 5. Twilight has been EQG world twice so would probably know the relevance of that magazine, not sure what that will divulge to her about Noah...other than healthy male perv...as we all.
Sorry for something so trivial a a double space but a typo is a 'never ending menace of writers everywhere'...err typo.
7571924 Thou didst speaketh Grammar NAZI did thous?
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7572867 Oh, Luna.
Boulder, you have made my day. I will now write a one shot in your honor.
7572739 Starlight Glimmer is far from disproved.
I feel like that should be hard worked-for.
Oh boy.
7571924
Nazis
7573085 Fixed!
7573085 Always looking out for my Nazi's.
7572883 Well that's worth a follow to see what happens.
7573046 You're determined to keep me guessing aren't you?
7573245 Oh. . . uh. . . well. . . I have had something in mind for a while. . . I will put my three current works on hold and have it out within a couple days.
7573281 NO, NO, wasn't expecting that, just if I have a follow on you I'll know when it's out, anyhow quick glance at your other works look's like something else to read any way.
7573401 IT'S TOO LATE! I HAVE ALREADY BEGUN!
7573437
7571536
Such knowledge is likely to be beneficial. Yes. Beneficial.
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