Noah prided himself on being a pragmatist. He followed the path that seemed right at the time, until one path led him to a world of ponies. They seemed nice, and Noah tried to be back, with limited success. Despite difficulties, one pony approached.
7566851 if you mean falling in love, with no magic used other than the normal stuff unicorns use magic for, sure. though bed time magic use is fine for kinky reasons. Still, NO MIND MAGIC IF THE CONSENT OF PARTICIPANTS IS QUESTIONABLE!
Intriguing, though I'm surprised that Blood Rose bobbled something as simple as the name of her current identity. That seems like it should be Changeling 101. Or maybe humans are just more wary of strangers than ponies. In any case, I look forward to seeing where you go with this.
Lyra- "But BonBon, I was only tryig to be friendly!" BonBon- "You were going to try to have sex with him and then turn him into a pony." Lyra- "That only happened once!"
It's nice to skip the typical, "oh crap I got here now what" plot that typically starts these stories out. Now we can just focus on the "now that everything's settled, now what?" right off the bat. Of course, because of this also we don't yet have a feel for his morality and personality, but that comes quickly enough. For now it's enough that he doesn't seem appalled at the idea of relationshipping with other ponies and is friends with many. Hair stylist, huh? Or just Barber? Makes sense he'd have to switch careers, not many modern Earth careers are directly applicable to pony society... Keep going! ;)
"You're going to love me," she whispered to no one.
24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lzhgp0uKwV1rpt4reo1_400.gif You just knew I was going to do that! Anyway, curious if this is silver verse or separate and if so where in the timeline is it relevant, just thinking this because of that Lyra bit and Kiki's comment below?
Please no mindfucking... aka mind control.
7566839 That would be entirely cheating. I'll leave that to Chrysalis.
7566841 no Chryssie! Please no
7566839 Ordinary nonmagical mindfucking is okay though?
7566843 Relax. Blood Rose is far from home.
7566851 if you mean falling in love, with no magic used other than the normal stuff unicorns use magic for, sure. though bed time magic use is fine for kinky reasons. Still, NO MIND MAGIC IF THE CONSENT OF PARTICIPANTS IS QUESTIONABLE!
7566853 OK
Intriguing, though I'm surprised that Blood Rose bobbled something as simple as the name of her current identity. That seems like it should be Changeling 101. Or maybe humans are just more wary of strangers than ponies. In any case, I look forward to seeing where you go with this.
Interesting so far. I wonder when he will reveal he knows something is off about Rose?
If Blood Rose is going to use that particular quote, she needs to get training from th pony whose it is.
Cute little quiet and Shy.
7566878 Subterfuge can come with difficulty to Equestrians. Good thing they are also pretty bad at noticing. That may cause the other...
Lyra- "But BonBon, I was only tryig to be friendly!"
BonBon- "You were going to try to have sex with him and then turn him into a pony."
Lyra- "That only happened once!"
Ok, with the one chapter I'm sold on it, and thus I will post corrections as I spot them!
pegasus (pegasi is the plural)
Edit: Don't know if you have an actual editor or you do it yourself, but I'd be glad to look chapters of this over before you post them. Let me know.
7567122 Currently, only my readers are my editors, searching for evil typos.
7567192
Changelings? Silver? Evil typos?
I must read this! The Tyld Hunt Begins!
…seems like he opened the sound.
off-balance.
I like the way this is going fav & tracking and I'll keep my eyes open for typos.
7568805 Fixed!
defiance of phyics - defiance of physics
have better planned - have anything better planned
*****
It's off to a solid start, can't wait to see where it goes from here.
I like Noah, I can see a lot of myself in him.
7570417 Fixes made! Chapter 2 awaits.
It's nice to skip the typical, "oh crap I got here now what" plot that typically starts these stories out. Now we can just focus on the "now that everything's settled, now what?" right off the bat. Of course, because of this also we don't yet have a feel for his morality and personality, but that comes quickly enough. For now it's enough that he doesn't seem appalled at the idea of relationshipping with other ponies and is friends with many.
Hair stylist, huh? Or just Barber? Makes sense he'd have to switch careers, not many modern Earth careers are directly applicable to pony society...
Keep going! ;)
7570438
24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lzhgp0uKwV1rpt4reo1_400.gif
You just knew I was going to do that!
Anyway, curious if this is silver verse or separate and if so where in the timeline is it relevant, just thinking this because of that Lyra bit and Kiki's comment below?
7571002 Should seek a job in the Day Spa with the sisters.
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7572599 There was a Silververse character who would need to be here.
7572613 ???Jake?
flustered Derpy is best Derpy.
7577392 All derpy is best derpy.
First thing that came to mind
I like it. Also, let the crusade against the mistakes Begin!
7588046 I think that was the point.
Flutter- SHIT! Someone already made that one!