Equestria has it's first super hero. A masked vigilante has appeared recently. This mysterious stallion looks like an alicorn and has been nicknamed "The Alicorn Prince". Scoots is in her 30's and still single. Both her friends are married and she works with kids as the Ponyville CMC troupe leader but just hasn't found the right guy. She's contented to be single, and enjoys her life but when this mysterious super hero falls into her life she finds there may be more for her.
Age Check
Scootaloo and Applebloom: 38
SweetieBelle: 37
Electricviolin: 8
Bugaloo: 7
Beetle: 6
Crayons: 12
Appleshine: 13
Appleseed: 13
Honeycrisp: 14
Chapters (3)
Wow, good start! There are a couple of punctuation errors, but it's a good story!
Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle are two words. Is Electricviolin meant to be one word?
7564985 It's two words Electric Violin I constantly argue with myself over how to write the names like Electricviolin or ElectricViolin
Applebloom or AppleBloom ect.
7612291 I was experimenting with the narration style.
How soon can you update this?
Out of curiosity, what does Apple Bloom do for a living?
What sort of enemies does the Alicorn Prince have?