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The MLP community has been a great source of happiness and joy. These stories are my attempt to give something back to those who have so enriched my life.

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This story is a sequel to The Choice


No one defeats Death. He harvests souls, destroys nations, ruins planets, and crushes stars. No life can escape his clutches forever. A clever pony may evade his plans for a time, but Death always wins. That is the rule. Death is coming and cannot be stopped.

But Death has found an enemy. Twilight Sparkle and Princess Luna refuse to surrender. Twilight is determined to save her friends and her beloved home. Twilight is not afraid of Death; she has defeated him once and she is coming for him again. It is time for Death to fear her.

The light is strong against the dark.

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Comments ( 15 )

Hmm, a thousand trillion? That's one quadrillion years, or 10^15 years. Most scientists say that the universe will end in maybe 10^100 years.
Maybe even in half that time, ~10^50 years, which is the shortest theoretical time that it takes for protons to decay. :twilightsmile:

An excellent beginning to an excellent sequel! I look forward to the rest of it!

And may Death get what's coming to him for his dishonor!

The title has me. St. Paul or J. K. Rowling? It's one of my favorite passages, and a chapter I've taken quite a few titles from myself.

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Yup. You are right. My theory is that Death got tired of waiting. (I would have died of boredom waaaaaaaay before that. I bet he didn't even bring a magazine to read.)

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I'm impressed. I wondered if anyone would pick up on the reference in the title. It's from Paul (but I am a Potter fan).

Years ago I saw a Twilight Zone episode that depicted Death as a kindly young man who was a good thing. It was a clever episode but I have seen too much death to think kindly of it. I am on St. Paul's side. I want to see Death terminated.

For what it's worth, "the light is strong against the dark" is a quote from the Xbox One game "Child of Light", which I really enjoyed. This tale will be filled with references.

I think I know where you got some of your inspiration from... :raritywink:

You'd THINK Twilight would know that Death can't be trusted, if he didn't keep his word before. :facehoof:

And are you sure those monsters weren't motorcycles and helicopters? :pinkiecrazy::pinkiehappy::rainbowwild:

Maybe Twilight would have strange dreams of the past in this timeline. :twilightsmile:

Great story!!!

How long was Discord waiting to meet Fluttershy? How badly was he longing for the day when he saw her?

the message "death is bad" (absolute truth) and the presence of the soul does not fit well. if there is where souls go, then death is not bad

Amazing. This was amazing story thank you so much <3.

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These endings are cool, but what if instead of being reborn she just, took the long way round?

I mean that griffin called her emperor, so she could just stay.

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